Wednesday, 17 September 2008

An interview with author, Jim Murdoch

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  • I’ve not met Jim Murdoch in the flesh, yet I feel I know him well. It isn’t often you come across real characters in the blogoshere, but this is one genuine Scottish character that makes you sit up. You can almost feel the abrasion in his writing. He comes across as a man of intense emotion and deep thought.

    Jim, you write both poetry and novels. What is your favourite medium?

I do Anthony, I also write short stories and plays. I don't honestly have a favourite medium anymore. When I was seventeen I thought of myself as a poet and so I stayed with what I knew. What I found was that I was having ideas that were too big to be expressed in the kind of poems I was inclined to write. The answer was simply to allow the text to dictate its own form. A few weeks ago, for example, I sat down and wrote only my second piece of flash fiction totally in dialogue. The conversation provided the context and there was no need for anything more.

  • Do you find the two writing forms interfere or compliment?

Without a doubt they compliment each other. I think of myself though as a poet who happens to work in other forms. This is not to get all snooty and suggest that poetry is the highest expression of all written styles but it is where I come from. Poetry taught me compression, how to say a lot in a few words. I cannot say in all honesty that I bring anything from prose back into my poetry however.


  • You’ve already completed four novels. Will you share with us how you came up with the idea for your latest book?


If by "latest" you mean the one I'm working on at the moment it was an amalgam of a number of things. I had just read The Body Artist by Don DeLillo and Shadow Child by P. F. Thomese, both of which deal with the loss of a loved one; in the latter book this is an infant and in the former a partner. These books highlighted the fact that I had not dealt fully with the death of my parents. The third thing that came into the mix was the flat my wife and I are living in at the moment. I started looking at all the things we have and wondering what my daughter would make of them once we weren't here. What she will be left with when I die is a puzzle to unravel and all these things lying around the flat are the clues. What she will make of them, who knows. She also will have been left; she will be one of the clues. The working title for the book is, predictable enough, Left.

  • Let’s talk about your routine. Do you plan your stories first with an outline or does it come to you as write it?
I have never been able to work with an outline, Anthony. I place a character in a situation and 'watch' what happens. Events aren't nearly as interesting to me as people. Many of my short stories for example are monologues and no reference is ever made to where the narrator is when they're talking. Intelligent readers are very good at filling in the blanks.
  • A good point to make, Jim. I’ve said time and again that what you DON’T say, says more than what you DO say. Do you know the end of the story before you start to write?

Only once, with Milligan and Murphy, my fourth novel. After I had completed the first chapter it was inevitable where the two protagonists would end up and so I sat down and wrote the final chapter there and then. Then I had to work out how to get them there. The details really weren't especially important, who they saw and what they did on the way, but this was very much the exception. I hate to read a story where the structure is as obvious as the piping outside the Pompidou Centre. Also, all my work is character driven. As far I'm concerned a book doesn't need a plot but without a point the whole thing is…well, pointless.

  • Do you have a process for developing your characters?
As they respond to the situations I place them in their personalities develop naturally. With Milligan and Murphy one had to be the dominant and one subordinate. It didn't matter but as I gave them lines to speak how they responded in one situation dictated how they would react in later situations so, although Milligan is subordinate (and the younger of the two), he also became the more adversarial.

The problem with my current project is that I found myself making the daughter character into my own daughter and commenting on our relationship so I scrapped everything and began again with an older woman. Then I found a third person narrative was keeping the woman's personality at a distance so I began again writing in the first person. Getting the voice right is paramount. This is actually the very opposite of what John Irving did with his last novel which began life in the first person and which he later rewrote in the third because it was too personal.

  • It’s said authors write themselves into their characters. Is there any part of you in your characters and what they would be?

Every word I write comes through me and so they're all tinged with me. That is inevitable. In a recent review of my first novel, the Irish playwright Ken Armstrong made a very astute observation: after reading my blog for several months he'd got used to my personality and he observed that I was both protagonist and antagonist and, of course, he's right. We are all a mishmash of different characteristics that it's not hard to isolate some of them to make a character. What I did with the hero was go back to a certain point in my life and wonder what would have happened if, from that point on, I'd made all the wrong choices, where would I have ended up? He's a caricature every bit as much as the character of Truth is.

  • You are, of course, talking here about your novel Living with the Truth which was published in May. Would you like to give us a brief summary?


The premise of the book is very simple: what would you do if you had a chance to spend a day with the personification of truth? What would you want to know? What wouldn't you want to know? Then what I do is take a man who doesn't want to know anything, who has carefully avoided knowing things and have Truth knock at his door. In the blurb I call him the least likely person to be the hero of anyone's novel but what strikes me listening to readers' comments is how willing they all have been to overlook his flaws. I never wrote him to be a very nice man and yet, and maybe it's a British thing, we always root for the underdog.

  • What is your most favourite part of your new book?

I suppose the right answer here is: how does one pick? But I have. I don't know if it's my favourite part of the book but it expresses well the kind of banter that goes on between Jonathan and Truth.

If I can set the scene: the two of them are in a cafĂ© and Truth has said grace. Jonathan realises that this means there must be a God, and so he asks…

“What’s He like?”
“Hmm?” responded Truth, who was in the process of dribbling lemon juice into some neat little cuts he’d made in his fish, “Who?”
“God, of course!”
“Oh, Him.” He was deliberating which chip to impale upon his fork; now really wasn’t the time for isagogics or theosophy. It was hard enough simply spelling them, let alone doing them, not that there was anything simple about spelling them. “Well, let’s see: his full name is Ubiquitous Eternity God, he’s a sixty-two year old unemployed song-writer living in California in a single room in The Brazil Hotel (it sounds grander than it really is), he’s got a fondness for Budweisers, massage parlours and walking out in front of oncoming traffic and stopping it with a wave of his hand while he crosses the road.”
“No, He’s not.”
“Oh, yes He is.” This was in danger of turning into a panto.
“I don’t believe you.”
“Suit yourself, but it definitely says ‘God’ on his bus pass.”
“God—‘Our Father who art in heaven,’ the creator of heaven and Earth in six days—gets the bus?”
“Oh, you mean that Gawd!”
“You knew full well I meant that Him.”
“You need a Saint Bernard to find your sense of humour.”
Jonathan let that pass: “Well?”
“He’s a bit like the picture of Him in the Sistine Chapel. Only older.”
“No, I don’t mean what does He look like. What’s He like?”
“Oh, you know, loving and wise and merciful and powerful and that sort of thing. Good fish this isn’t it?”

  • Jim, that's a very amusing passage. You actually finished Living with the Truth ten years ago and yet it's only now appearing in print: how come?

Long story. Short answer: I let my job get in the way. I was working myself into the ground – in fact I did (twice) – and I had no time for anything. I wrote in the cracks and that was it. Two years ago I had the mother and father of a breakdown and decided that the time had come to draw a line in the sand.

  • Sorry to hear that, Jim. What struggles have you had on the road to first being published?

That's the thing. In the past ten years there has been one hell of a change in the publishing world. Getting a deal with a publisher is simply not what it once was, though, when you read about the difficulties encountered by many of the authors of old, I'm not sure that it ever was what it once was. As you yourself realise the marketing support that comes with a book deal is nothing to write home about; the burden falls squarely on the author's shoulders. I had a decision to make and I chose to opt for self-publishing. For a lot of others reasons too.

  • What has been the best part about being published?

Maybe it's just me but I didn't get terribly excited about it. I don't think that's that unusual. Once Woody Allen has finished with his film then he's finished with it. The end result is not the point. The creative process is the point. In many respects I think about what I've written as what gets discarded when I'm done working out the issues that are central to the piece. I'm done with it. It doesn't interest me anymore. Okay, I'm exaggerating for effect but, no, I wasn't especially excited to hold my book in my hand. That said, it was a nice book to hold – lovely cover.

  • What do you want readers to remember and carry with them after reading your novel?

If I was to answer that then I'd ruin the book for them. Suffice to say the responses I've had, although varied, have all got the point. One was downright angry with me – "How dare you!" she said – and another ended up in tears, one was puzzled and another confused and every single one of those responses was a natural and personal and appropriate reaction to what happens in the book.

  • I understand. One or two readers have asked why I ended Without Reproach the way I did, but we tell the tale we want, that's why we're authors. Tell me, Jim, which authors' work inspires you?

The problem with answering a question like that is that people will automatically either look for evidence of those writers in your work and I'm not sure I live up to my heroes. An appreciation of Samuel Beckett wouldn't hurt when reading my third novel but the first two owe more of a debt of gratitude to Keith Waterhouse's Billy Liar and there's definitively a touch of Spike Milligan to the fourth. The fifth? We'll have to see. As for poets, Larkin without a doubt and also the American William Carlos Williams.

  • Do you have a website for readers to go to if they want to know more?

If they go to my website they can read an extract from the book and there are links to about a dozen online reviews – all positive I hasten to add. I do run a literary blog, The Truth About Lies, where I often write essays about my writing and provide links to sites where you can read my poems and stories.

The publisher's website is the best place to go (and probably the cheapest overall) but the book is listed on Amazon and a few of the usual suspects.




  • Characters, writers and success.

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    Characters are most successful when we, as writers, equate with them.

    Book Characters

    When we identify with characters in books, when we take pleasure in their friendship, the characters become real to us.

    Psychologist claim characters are a prognosis of some component of a writer's persona. Maybe so, maybe not; whatever, this doesn’t have to signify that your written character is a portrayal of you – although this can happen, what it means is that you write as if they are actual people.

    Performers.

    When creating our stories, we are perhaps inclined to be performers as well as writers. When we create a character, we psychologically recreate the role, and in order to write successfully, we see ourselves being that character; we verbalize the figure, we act out the role in our mind. If we can't do it, we don't write with authority.

    Even though we probably refute that our protagonist mirrors us, they are perhaps the persona we would be if we dressed in their cloak - even the dark characters. Buried deep in most of us is a dark side, when we write, we allow that side to bubble to the surface.

    By whatever means, in order to be successful as writers we need to breathe soul into our fantasies - and only by doing so, will our imaginings become someone else's reality.

    Monday, 15 September 2008

    Publishers and books for children

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    Hi, Anthony, can you tell if it’s true that a lot of publishers are no longer looking for new authors? I’m writing a book for children, and I’ve been told that a number of personalities are writing children’s stuff, so now it’s nigh on impossible to get a foot in the door. I’ve also been told publishers aren’t even looking for new authors. Is this true?


    • Hello, Susan, I'm afraid to a limited extent it’s true, especially as far as books for children is concerned. You have to remember, publishers are there primarily to make money. If they make money, you might get a few crumbs, you might even get to be famous, but a publisher’s mandate is financial.

    • It's also true that a publisher will take on a celebrity whilst rejecting talented, new writers. The subject pisses me off – I’ve ranted about it several times on my other blog, Bedlam. If you're serious though, and if your work is good, it shouldn’t put you off. You know the saying, “What do you call a writer who won’t give up – published.”

    • Someday, somewhere, you'll get accepted and all will be forgotten .... well almost.

    • Keep writing, and keep dreaming. Don’t forget, JK Rowling was a new author just a few years ago. Publishers are ALWAYS looking for books they can sell, but most books submitted to publishers aren't what they're looking for. Either the writer isn’t skilled at their craft or the plot is too recognizable.

    • The more prestigious the publishing house, the more famous the existing authors, the higher the standard and the harder it is to get in. But they DO still take people on.

    • Posted by Anthony James Barnett - author of Without Reproach
    • Next post, Are authors recluses.
    • My other blog, Bedlam.
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    Sunday, 14 September 2008

    Are authors recluses?

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    AJ, are a lot of authors recluses, such as not giving interviews or book signing? 
    Well, Sandra, I know of some that are partial recluses, though not to the point of refusing to sign books. Some of my writer friends are extroverts. I'm guess I'm somewhere in the centre. I'm actually quite shy. I tend to edge to the back when there's a crowd. When I'm centre stage, I don't feel comfortable, but I have done it. 

    I've already had a book signings and radio interviews. I was very anxious, but I guess I got through one way or another.

    One of my author friends is just the opposite. She was a teacher, and is quite comfortable in front of people, in fact I think she enjoys centre stage, so there can be no generalization.

    Maybe more tend to be comfortable with their own company, because it is rather a lonely business.

    Next post, interview.

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    Thursday, 11 September 2008

    An interview with author, Linda Jones.

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    • Linda Jones, 40, director of the Midlands agency, Passionate Media, is an author and journalist and co-editor of the freelance writing blog, www.freelancewritingtips.com – here she shares news of her books and tells how a ‘dream’ to publish fiction may never be accomplished!

      Hi Linda, how long have you been a writer?


    Hello Anthony. I've been a journalist for 19 years. I trained with the Express & Star, Wolverhampton and have worked as a reporter, feature writer, columnist, sub, news editor and editor, in the UK and Russia. My journalistic work is outlined at http://www.lindajoneswork.com/

    • So how many books have you written?


    I've written two books - one is the (very modestly titled!) Greatest Freelance Writing Tips in the World, and the other is Divorce and Separation, The Essential Guide.

    • Something most of us need or needed guidance on. What prompted you to write your latest books?

    The freelance writing tips book came about because I was passionate about passing on realistic advice about what works and what doesn't when building a freelance career.

    I've been able to progress from being a lone freelancer in my bedroom at home, to building an agency working on copy for a variety of customers - from editors on national newspapers and magazines - to businesses and charities.

    Along the way, I have been asked for lots of advice from other writers and I have mentored young journalists, I knew there was a book in there!

    Feedback about the book has been amazing. It's aimed at people who want to make a living writing non-fiction, rather than a 'hobby' writer or one who is happy to write 'for exposure' - and it's certainly not a guide to writing. The title comes from the rest of the series, but in my introduction to the book, I say the tips are 'the best in the world' because they worked for me!

    • First hand knowledge is always the best. So what about your other book?


    Divorce and Separation, the Essential Guide was commissioned after I pitched three parenting subjects to the publisher.

    I write a lot about various aspects of parenting, as the mum of twins, for various magazines. As a journalist, it's also my job to follow the news and I was growing very tired of reports that said the children of parents who'd parted seemed to be responsible for all of society's ills! When I thought of the love and security my friends who happen to be divorced or separated were still providing, I knew these doom and gloom-laden reports were way off the mark and I wanted to write a book that helped loving parents understand that divorce or separation doesn't have to be the defining moment in a child's development.

    I am most proud of the testimonies in the book from parents who have 'been there and done that' themselves – proving that going your separate ways doesn't have to be the end of the world.

    I hope that for aspiring writers, my experience with this book shows the old adage 'write what you know' isn't always true- interviewers have been a bit baffled that I am neither separated nor divorced - in fact I'm not even married yet - but that's another story!

    • Linda, what struggles have you had on the road to being published? It not often an easy road.

    I’ve had six book proposals accepted in the last three years – yes really. Four were ditched at various stages - that was a bit painful! I’ve discovered that the 'answer' to the 'dream' of being published isn't writing the book - it's getting it read and even the biggest publishers can't always manage that, can they?

    • Too true! What has been the best part about being published?

    Anthony, for someone who is already a working journalist, it is very useful to have some books under your belt - to show editors that you have a specialism that you know enough about or care deeply about, and this in itself can provide the hook for other features.

    • Where are your books available from?

    You can buy or order both books in major UK bookshops, as well as from a variety of online sources, including Amazon of course, or direct form the publishers. With both books, I have set up my own blog, and through an Amazon Associates scheme, get a (little tiny) bit paid directly into my bank account if people click through from the 'buy here' links.

    The freelance writing blog is at http://www.freelancewritingtips.com/ and the divorce blog is at http://www.essentialdivorceguide.com/ With each site, I endeavour to update regularly, with news, features, hints and tips. I have a freelance writing tips Facebook group and I send members updates of writing opportunities when I can as well as letting them know any about any snippets of news, media appearances or reviews. The aim is to promote 'word of mouth' about the book and help readers feel they are getting something of genuine value - the blog is carrying on where the book has left off!

    • And have you any other work in the pipeline?

    Like many writers of non-fiction, I have also tapped away at some short stories. I know that this isn't an area that is particularly popular with publishers and there is one story that I would love to develop into a fully-fledged novel - but I'm a mum too and somehow I haven't found time to follow that dream as far as I would like. At work, I'm also a trainer in non-fiction writing skills, and it is very difficult to contemplate taking time away from such fought-for work to be more creative!

    • Linda Jones, thank you for sharing this moment with us. I know just how busy your schedule is.

    Next post, book signing, Ondara.

    My other blog, Bedlam.

    Monday, 8 September 2008

    Book Signing, Ondara

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    I just want to let everyone know about a forthcoming book signing event, on 20th September 2008.

    Sixteen authors, including yours truly, will be signing books at 'Bookworld España' in the new shopping centre at Ondara, Costa Blanca, Spain.

    Yes Sixteen authors! If you don't fancy the idea of one, there's always another. Out of sixteen authors, you're bound to find one whose book will suit you down to the ground, and you can have it signed anyway you wish by your favourite author...

    My slot will be 11:30 until 12:00. Don't forget, 20th September.

    So if you're in the area, visiting, holidaying, or just plain old living, please pop along. I'd love to meet you.

    Next post, editors.
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    Editors maketh the writer


    I’m privileged to know and be in touch with lots of writers. I’m captivated by how they write, how they fashion their stories and characters, how they organize and research information for their novels. One thing that comes from this is that editing is a very touchy subject.

    Writers have said repeatedly, that going back to correct the little things in their writing is an unremitting and thankless task. The thing is, our text is never as good as we want. We constantly seek perfection, we twiddle, we cut, we polish. But only when we get to the editorial stage with the publisher does the real novel start to shape up.

    You think your manuscript to be perfect? Think again!

    When a professional editor starts putting your manuscript into a logical sequence, and starts helping with character or story development, your story starts to read like a real book.
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    If you’ve never worked with a true professional, then you’re in for a pleasant surprise. Editors help writers establish their voice and improve their writing. A good editor is worth their weight in gold.
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    Be nice to your editor. She might just make you look like a proper writer!
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    Saturday, 6 September 2008

    Editing and the wannerbie writer

    No sooner has a writer put the finishing touch to their work, the pregnancy period over, the birth a spectacle of awe, than the whole euphoria starts slipping away.

    They must now strive to lift it to a higher level. The editing must start, but as a wannerbie, most writers’ potential is obscured by awe of the process of writing. They’re overwhelmed by their own creation.

    The manuscript they’ve produced, seems an exquisite mix of thought and disclosure. Afraid of damaging this splendid prose, the wannerbie nudges at words and twiddles with punctuation, without considering changing a single expression – which is why they remain, unpublished.

    With experience, comes an understanding of their deficiency. The wannerbie gradually becomes aware that their work falls short of perfection. They realize writing is not simply the process of organizing fine words onto paper, but the practice of raising ideas to an interesting and readable level.

    This is the bottom line of all artists’ dreams, the camouflaging of their muse. Simplicity is the key to success. The age of capricious words is over; flowery shit is out. Be down to earth, talk in simple terms and you just might get on the right track.

    Successful writers dump restrictive ideas of editing, they apply themselves to cutting.

    The very enchantment of successful books comes about because of an attempt to rise towards a higher point. No good writer is ever satisfied. This struggle breathes life into their work.

    Cut, cut, and cut again – and you might just make it.

    My next post, the opening.

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    Friday, 5 September 2008

    The opening of a book -

    In the opening of your novel, you should let readers know just who the main characters are, or at least foretell of them.

    Show the protagonists under some kind of tension. Let it be known there's a problem that needs resolving. It can be internal conflict, external conflict or conflict of man against nature, or any combination of them, but there must be conflict. Without conflict or there is no story. A novel is not a random series of events that happen to be of interest to the writer. There has to be form and reason.

    Let the reader know in whom they should invest their empathy. Whose side are they on? The bad character can be congenial but set on a course we must frown on.

    Let it be known what is at stake. Editors and readers want to know this from the outset. What does the main character stand to gain or lose? What will be the result if the protagonist wins?

    Confirm the setting; where and when does the story takes place?

    Link the beginning to the end. Let the problem that starts the story not be resolved until the final few pages. There can be numerous minor problems between, but the starting problem must be the major conflict, and the only conflict that threads its way throughout the whole story.

    And finally, you must set the tone of the story at the beginning, sombre or animated, amusing or heart-rending, let the reader be in no doubt what sort of story they are about to enjoy.

    Next post is about my podcast.

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    Podcast, here I come.

    At last technology has caught up with me. I was the last person in the world to succumb to broadband, the last person in the world to have a mobile (still don't know how to use the damn thing), now I've made it into the audio world of podcast.

    I've made my blog available on podcast. You can can catch it on your computer direct from the post, OR subscibe in the left-hand column - and listen to it on your very own iPod as you meander your way around the world. JUst think, going about your business listening to my ramblings!!!

    I've also made my RSS available as a full blogpost because of the podcast. I apologize if some of the earlier blogs are shortened versions, but from now on, all new posts should be complete broadcasts.

    Hope it makes your life easier and my blog more enjoyable.

    Next post is about synopsis

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    Wednesday, 3 September 2008

    How to present a Story Synopsis

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    A synopsis is important
    A synopsis could be the most important thing you ever write. Get it wrong and your book might never see the light of day. Make it stand out, make it interesting, and you might well be on the way to becoming a published writer.

    A story synopsis can take on many shapes; it has no definite arrangement, but like the manuscript, should be double line-spaced and clearly printed.
    The chief component of the synopsis, and sometimes the only element, is a short narrative of the story, and SHOULD:-
    • Always be written in present tense.
    • Name and describe all major protagonists.
    • Sum up key events in the novel.
    • Specify the book’s point of view:
    • Contain virtually no dialogue:

    A background piece might occasionally lead the synopsis itself, but only if the story's framework necessitates explanation, (where the plot may hinge on unfamiliar story elements such as in sci-fi or fantasy).
    Brief
    Try to keep the synopsis to just a couple of pages. After all, you're trying to entice the editor by presenting a brief sample. The last thing you want, is to bore your tired and weary editor into slinging the synopsis into the bin.
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    Tuesday, 2 September 2008

    Why do we read?

    From: Mellow my Rome

    Subject: Why?

    Message: I would like to gain your perspective on the follow topic. Why should we read books if it is only a one dimensional thought? Thank you!

    Well to start with, Mellow-my-Rome, I’d like to say when you’re asking questions, please use your own name, and a little more consideration.

    My name is Anthony, and I like people to call me either that or Tony. I find your query a little abrupt. When you're asking for assistance, try using diplomacy or you might not get answers.

    I also have to say it seems rather like you’re asking me to answer your homework question. This isn’t the type of query normally asked on my blog. However, that said, I will attempt to put across my ideas.

    In my opinion, to say books are one-dimensional, is taking a rather simplistic approach. It smacks of psycho-babble. Who says books are one-dimensional? With what authority do you claim it?

    The act of reading is a dynamic process that stimulates all senses.

    • Provocative descriptions inspire sexual desires, conjure up sounds, bring back memories of smell, and create vivid pictures in the mind.
    • We cry, smile and laugh with a good story – how can that be attributed to the one-dimensional hypothesis?
    • There is no question of, ‘Why should we read books’. We read books because we choose to.
    • Reading is an enjoyable pastime. No one forces us to read (except perhaps, in an educational environment).
    • We read books for relaxation and pleasure. We choose to lose ourselves in the beauty of well-written books, where the story, in our minds, becomes a perfect translation of events.
    • Reading is the diametric opposite of a film, where viewers share the director's translation of events - which can never be as perfect as the one in YOUR mind. A book has as many interpretations as there are readers, each creating their own perfect scenario.
    • If you believe there needs to be a reason for you to not read, then don’t.

    To sum it up Mellow-my-Rome, I’m not here to persuade you to read. I have no interest one way or another in the way you pass your time. It will simply be your loss if you choose not to.

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    Monday, 1 September 2008

    An interview with author, Sela Carsen




    • Sela Carsen is just your ordinary, average, everyday stay at home mom.
      Really. Ignore the two Monkey Children. And the disaster area she calls home. And the Darn-Near Perfect Husband who patiently puts up with the chaos. Did she mention the Boxer?
      If you see her talking to herself while she’s going down the produce aisle at the grocery store with her travel mug of coffee welded to her hand, well, doesn’t everyone do that?
      Fueled by the caffeine-induced jitters, she writes comic romances featuring smart, funny, mostly alive, occasionally dead (and undead), and not always entirely human characters. Her writing runs the gamut from paranormal to historical, and from sweet to steamy, with several rabbit trails in between.
      She currently resides in Dante’s Seventh Circle , also known as Midwestern Suburbia.

      Hello, Sela, would you like to share with us how you came up with the idea for your latest book?

    Hi, Anthony, I started writing CAROLINA WOLF about five years ago when we were getting ready to leave England and return home to the US. My husband was in the US Air Force and we’d been fortunate enough to get a tour at RAF Lakenheath in Suffolk. I loved it there, but our time was up. We were on our way to South Carolina for his last assignment before retirement. As we researched the area we were going to, I realized that there was a huge swamp nearby – a national park, actually. The Congaree National Park is North America’s largest old-growth floodplain forest.

    I looked on the map again and realized that there was a small town that conjoined the area and started thinking.

    Essentially, I started with the setting, then the characters came with it.

    • And what about planning? Do you plan your stories first with an outline or does it come to you as write it?

    I’m a “pantser,” short for “I write by the seat of my pants.” I just start writing and see what happens. I’ve tried plotting a few times, but it’s never worked out. It sucks all the fun out of writing for me.

    • Some people like to know where they’re heading when they write. Do you know the end of the story at the beginning?

    Well …. My husband once asked me that. I said, “Yes. They all end with ‘And they lived happily ever after.’” *gg*

    • So do you have a process for developing your characters?

    No, I’m afraid not. Boy, I should never write a “how-to” book, eh? They develop on the page as I write. Sometimes they absolutely crack me up, sometimes I try to steer them down a road I think is the right one and they quit on me altogether. I always think that you can plan all you like, but you never really know what someone is going to do in any given situation until they’re actually in it. You can assume, but sometimes you’re wrong.

    • Sela, some people say that authors write themselves into their characters. Is there any part of you in your characters and what they would be?

    I tend to write very “everyman” heroines and thus far, they’ve all been Southern. I am a Southern woman, I understand Southern women. Someone once told me that as a Northeasterner, she found it offensive when people called her “ma’am” or opened doors for her. I realized then that I couldn’t ever write an authentic character from that part of the country because I genuinely didn’t understand that attitude or its roots.

    • What’s your favorite part about this book?

    Anthony, I love the way my heroine grows. At the beginning, she’s very ordinary. She even considers herself boring. Through the story, she comes into herself as a whole woman. It was a really fun theme to play with.

    • If you’re enjoying it, Sela, you’re definitely onto a winner. So would you like to give us a brief summary of the book?

    Debra Henry is boring. And she’s okay with that. Really. It’s not as if the teensy amount of witchcraft she inherited is worth much. So what’s up with the werewolves that start crawling out of the woods, er, swamps? When one werewolf saves her from an outcast of his kind, she takes him home to patch him up, but healing him awakens the magic that sleeps in her blood. Suddenly, Debra’s not quite as boring as she thought.

    Maddox Moreau likes being the BWIS – the Big Wolf In the Swamp. By day, he’s a wildlife management specialist at the Congaree National Park in South Carolina. By night, he enjoys howling it up with different women. At least until he meets the one woman who can share his soul. Rescuing her seals his fate, but only if he can also protect her from the rogue werewolf with a nasty stalker streak.

    Unpredictable magic and rampant werewolves liven up the swamp in CAROLINA WOLF.

    • When in the process of writing your book did you begin to look for a publisher?

    I wrote this one as a response to a call for submission. My publisher, Samhain, was looking for stories to put into an anthology called TICKLE MY FANTASY. They wanted all paranormal romantic comedies. I had written the first few scenes way back when, but never finished it. I realized I had the beginnings of the perfect story sitting in my hard drive and I just went from there.

    • So what struggles have you had on the road to being published?

    I’ve always had the hardest time with promotion. It’s difficult for me to put myself out there and say “Buy my book!”

    • Tell me about it. I absolutely hate promotion, it’s just something we have to put up with though, I’m afraid. What about the best part about being published?

    It’s just incredibly fun to hang out with authors. There’s a camaraderie there that is difficult to understand until you’ve had the experiences of contracts and covers and promotion. We still deal with all the things that all writers do: recalcitrant characters, building themes, getting the words down, but there’s a sense that there’s a concrete goal at the end. It’s almost a relief in some ways.

    • What do you want readers to remember and carry with them after reading your novel?

    That they had fun. That they smiled. That there’s a core of strength in women that they alone can tap. And that they can enjoy the journey of finding that strength and finding love.

    • And do you have plans to write another book?

    It’s already in the works. I’m writing a tie-in story to my first novella, NOT QUITE DEAD. One of the secondary characters really deserved his own happily ever after. After that, I want to get back to my sole historical and revise it, then I can finally start the novel I’ve been playing around with for a while.

    • Okay Sela, let’s get down to the plug. Where can readers find a copy of your book?

    CAROLINA WOLF will be on sale through Bookstore and More in February 2009. In the meantime, you can find my other stories, NOT QUITE DEAD and HEART OF THE SEA at My Bookstore and More, as well as other e-book sellers. HEART OF THE SEA is also available in Kindle at Amazon.com.

    • Do you have a website for readers to go to?

    Absolutely! You can find me at http://www.selacarsen.com/ I blog on a semi-regular basis, too, so click on the blog button

    • Sela Carsen, Thank you for sharing this moment with us. Good luck with the sales …. And promotion.
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    The people and rssHugger


    At last it is here, rssHugger, a website to help bloggers publicize their blogs, whilst helping people find blogs subjects they’re interested in.

    Through the internet, rssHugger is trying to bring blog writers and blog readers together. Each blog is manually checked, so it seems rssHugger will be the first ever, spam free rss directory for bloggers.
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    Friday, 29 August 2008

    Question -how do you write a manuscript?

    Tell Me a Story

    Can you help me, AJ. I'm afraid I've a few questions. How do you write a manuscript? When can you put the information about the book in the transcript? When do you insert the little tribute to someone. Is it when you send your book in or what?


    1. Hi! If your question is HOW to write a book, then my answer is you should try purchasing a text book on creative writing. This blog is too way limited to go into that. I can give a few hints and tips, but for a complete course, you must study a book.
    2. If your question is on the subject of the correct way to PRESENT your work, then take a look at my post Submission Guidelines It's already been covered there. Most publishing houses will toss your manuscript onto the slush pile without even looking if it doesn't meet industry standards, so it pays to do it correctly.
    3. As far as the book blurb is concerned, my publishers asked me to present a short synopsis just as the editing process was drawing to a close, which is a long time after it was accepted for publication.
    4. I was also asked if I would like to present a dedication page at a similar time. So as you can see. You have no need to think about things like that until you have a contract in your hands.

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    An interview with writer, Cindy Price




    • Cindy Price has been an online friend for a while now, and I thought it time to take a closer look at what she does.
    • Hi Cindy, would you like to tell us how long you've been writing?

    Hello Anthony. Well, actually, I really don't ever remember not writing.

    • So, how many stories and poems have you produced?
    I've written many stories. I have a novel in the works but that's not my passion really. I have hundreds of poems that I wrote years ago and have had a few of them published.

    • It's always nice to hear of success, congratulations. It isn't often poetry gets published now. It seems to have gone out of fashion. What was it that prompted you to write your latest work?
    I see such a need for people who call themselves Christians, to know what they believe and why they believe it. So many people say they know what they believe about God, and about Jesus, but few actually do. If we don't know what we believe and why, then we don't know how to stand against evil when we're faced with it.

    • So would you say your work was aimed mainly at men, women or children?
    It's written really for men or women but my heart is in women's ministry.

    • Okay, Cindy, let's give you a shameless plug. Where is your work available? How can readers get at it?
    A large part of it is on my blog, STAND

    • Did you get that folk, click your fingers and take a look, that's all it takes. Cindy, let's hope you have a few hits because of this.... Have you anything in the pipeline at the moment?
    Well, I'm currently looking for an agent and I have a small piece that should be out in the Spring of 2009.

    • The best of luck with it, and with finding an agent. Would you like to give a brief outline of your work?
    Thanks Anthony. The piece is called "Stand" and is based on Galatians 5:1. The purpose of it is to teach others what God has taught me about standing on His Word to have victory in life.

    What a brilliant concept, Cindy. I wish you well. Remember folks, get clicking, take a look at Cindy's work right now on STAND.


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    Wednesday, 27 August 2008

    Giving your story that extra zest

    Tell Me a Story - Advice 

    AJ, how can I make my story more interesting to others. I've asked a couple of friends to read it, and they both glazed over afterwards. I know they didn't think much of it, but they made the right 'noises' just so I wasn't upset.

    Look at books by successful authors to see how they did it and why you found it interesting. You really should delve into each of your characters until they become 'real' to you. Develop them so they exist as people in your mind, know everything about them, all their faults and highlights, their likes and dislikes, their favourite music, food, films etc.

    Unless YOU feel your character's problems are real, no one else will.
    Before you start to write, rehearse the story in your mind until you're in the correct mood. Feel the emotions you want to generate in the story, be at 'one' with your characters and the problems they're facing. Have empathy.

    You must also make sure you have a central problem running throughout the story, one that can't be resolved until the very last few pages of the last chapter of the book. Make the problem one that is of paramount importance to the central person, something that affects them if it cannot be resolved. Intertwine this major problem with with minor problems that are resolved within a few chapters.

    Hope you found this of value.... and keep writing.

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    An interview with author, Ken Preston







    • Ken, how long have you been a writer?


    Hmm. How long have I been alive - almost 44 years, so whilst I cannot honestly say I’ve been writing for 44 years it sometimes feels like it.I’ve written stories from a very young age, and have always been a passionate reader. Yet my first experience of reading was a disaster.

    • Why was that?

    Well, at my junior school, my teacher labelled me a failure because I couldn't read. After a visit to the school to complain, my dad took me to the library and borrowed Treasure Island, Kidnapped, and the Biggles books, (basically his childhood favourites) and we read them together. He taught me to read by sharing his pleasure in reading.

    • And so a future author was born! Wow, some introduction to the world of literature. So how many books have you written?

    Not many, Anthony, but if you were to ask me how many books I have started and then abandoned the number would be much higher! I have three completed manuscripts and one almost complete, which I’m planning on finishing soon. Two of them will never see the light of day.

    • Why is that?

    Mainly because they’re not very good, but do I regret writing them, spending all that time and effort creating two novels that will never be published? No, I don’t. They were both valuable experiences, and taught me a great deal about the process. Writing a novel, like all things in life, needs to be learned, and you can only learn by doing.

    • I think most newbies don’t understand that, Ken. They seem to think all they have to do is sit at a computer and out it comes. They don’t know the hidden years that go into ‘overnight success’.

    My third completed manuscript was “Caxton Tempest at the End of the World”, which is now published and available in Europe, America, Australia and Japan! My next book will be “The Devil and Edward Teach”, hopefully available towards the end of the year.

    • So what prompted you to write your latest book?

    Well, “Caxton Tempest at the End of the World”, came about because I’d completed two downbeat novels and wanted to write something more exciting. I'm interested in Victorian literature and the supernatural, so a novel combining those two elements seemed natural. I started by making a list of everything I wanted to include: Foggy Victorian streets, gas lamps, street urchins, a Fagin style bully, a Sherlockian main character, secret societies, tunnels, vampires, demons, etc. How I ended up with a female cowboy and an ass-kicking Chinese martial arts master, I will never know!

    It may sound a little odd to start with a list of elements to include in a novel, rather than an idea itself, but the idea soon followed.

    • So is it aimed mainly at men, women or children?

    If you can read, it’s aimed at you!!! I set out to attract a young adult audience, but a lot of adults have read it and told me how much they enjoyed it. And if you read the reviews on Amazon.co.uk you will see my female readership very much love Denver McCade. So I guess it's aimed at everyone, but only if you enjoy the plot elements I listed before. You know, Foggy Victorian streets, etc, etc…

    • And where can we purchase it?

    Any online bookstore, such as Amazon, etc, and ordered from all good bookshops.

    • Have you any other work in the pipeline, Ken?

    Yes, I’m hoping to publish “The Devil and Edward Teach” soon. This is a pirate adventure, again aimed at the young adult audience but hopefully with crossover appeal to adults.

    • Would you like to give a brief outline of “Caxton Tempest at the End of the World”?

    Well, orphan, Jim Kerrigan and his young brother, George, live by their wits on the streets. After stumbling across a mutilated corpse, Jim finds himself thrust into the dangerous world of Caxton Tempest. With new friends, Denver McCade and Johnny Chen, Jim must fight for his life against a killer intent on opening up the gates of Hell. Other forces of evil are gathering, and Tempest finds he needs the help of an unlikely ally if he is to defeat them…

    • Do you have a website for further information?

    I certainly do, Anthony. My web is http://www.caxtontempest.com/ You can read the first 3 chapters for free, find deleted chapters, excerpts from my journal, and a couple of short stories. I have also published different versions of the front cover charting its evolution from initial idea to finished illustration. Plus there are links to my blog and other stuff too.

    • Ken. Thanks for the insight. I’m sure everyone will be grateful for it, and good luck with your sales.

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    An interview with author, Michael Raymond




    • I’d like to introduce you to author, Michael Raymond. Hi Mike, would you like to tell us how long you've been writing?

    Hi Anthony. Well, as a courseware developer, for 15 yrs. For fun, since 2005.

    • So how many books have you written?

    Just the one so far, it’s called "We The People”. It’s a Science Fiction adventure.

    • And what prompted you to write it?

    I suppose reading an article about dirty bombs and terrorists put the idea into my head.

    • So is your book aimed mainly at men, women or children?

    Well Anthony, it’s really aimed at men and women who enjoy 'what-if' stories.

    • I’m intrigued, Mike! Let’s give it a plug, where can people buy your book?

    It’s available at http://stores.lulu.com/wethepeople

    • And have you any other work in the pipeline?

    I have Anthony, I'm working on a short ebook for writers and formulating the sequel to “We The People”.

    • You’re quite a busy bee then. Would you like to give us a very brief outline of, “We The People”? I’m sure everyone is curious.

    Well, dozens of cities worldwide are destroyed by nuclear bombs. A group calling themselves 'The People' claim responsibility and demand that all militaries disarm and disband.

    The hero is a CIA operative who is trying to find the terrorists in a hurry. The governments of the world are starting to comply.Instead of terrorists, he discovers a covert operation by aliens to prepare the world for invasion.

    It isn't enough to find and destroy them because he must also learn about the invasion and about the new type of nuclear weapons used in the attacks.

    • Wow! Great stuff. I hope people are taking note. Do you have a Web address for the readers? I find most like to have a contact place to read up about authors and books.

    I do, it’s http://www.mike-raymond.com/

    • Now then, Mike, I understand you’re doing something rather special with this book. Would you like to explain?

    Thanks for mentioning it, Anthony. All royalties for this book are being donated to the Canadian Cancer Society. I’ve started a project called READ for Cancer - that encourages my readers to donate to local Cancer fundraisers and circulate the book. Details can be found on the web site.

    • Mike, that’s a wonderful gesture. Readers, take note and support this guy. What a great thing to do. You deserve every success. I wish you all the best.
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    Monday, 25 August 2008

    "The Lace Reader" by Brunonia Barry, in $2 million Book Deal

    Writer Brunonia Barry has brought about a terrific accomplishment with her striking literary debut, "The Lace Reader".

    Even before the novel started building buzz, Barry had created an enormous noise in the literary world.

    "The Lace Reader," initially self-published in 2007, was singled out by William Morrow in a $2 million deal for it, together with her next novel. I wish Brunonia Barry well. I just wish I could join her.

    In fact, come to think about it, $2 million for every book I can ever write would do me nicely, thank you very much. Ms. Barry hasn't done badly for someone who couldn't get published in the first place and had to do it herself.

    How do these people pull it off? My début certainly pales into insignificance by the side of it.

    "The Lace Reader" is already sitting at number 53 on the Amazon best selling list. Quite an achievement. My own novel reached number 56 on Amazon Canada for just a few HOURS during ONE DAY.

    Not quite in the same league, doesn't have quite the same ring does it. Am I wingeing, am I jealous? Yep I sure am! Who gives a shit!

    I wonder if Brunonia Barry will write about me on her blog?


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    Saturday, 23 August 2008

    Is Calpe real or did you make it up for 'Without Reproach'?

    • Hi. I've just finished reading your novel, Without Reproach - I thought it very impressive. In it you talked about a place called Calpe. Is it real, or did you make it up? The way you describe it, makes me want to go there sometime.

    Hi Pauline. Glad you enjoyed Without Reproach. Yes, for sure Calpe is a real place, it's a local resort and you ought to be able to look it up on your browser.

    I live not too far from there. Here's a picture of the place. I've included a couple of other pics as well so you'll understand the area where Without Reproach is set.

    The 'Peñon' rock, Calpe.


    The village of JalĂłn



    The sierra local to JalĂłn

    Friday, 22 August 2008

    An Author's Voice



    • AJ, you mentioned in an earlier post about finding your own 'voice' as a writer. Just what do you mean by 'voice'?

    Hi, Margaret, nice to hear from you. When I talk about an author's voice, I suppose I really mean style. After a while, the way you write will be recognizably 'yours', rather like a painter can be recognized by their painting style. Think about it, you'd never confuse a piece of work by Lowry with one by Constable.
    In a similar way, people will know the book is yours by the flow of words, the way you structure your sentences, even by words used. We all tend to have favourite words that are used more often than another writer.
    Sometimes, a writer might have more than one 'voice'. This happens when they produce work in a completely different genre - let's say a humour as opposed to a thriller. They automatically adopt a different style. I've done it myself with short stories; I've used a different voice. It wasn't something deliberate. It just happened because of the nature of the story.
    When I write about 'finding YOUR voice' I mean settling into a style which you find comfortable. Try to make your work distinctive; don't EVER attempt to emulate another writer no matter how much you might admire them. Be yourself and your voice will start to show.
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    Wednesday, 20 August 2008

    An interview with author, Susie Clinkard.

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    Today I'm interviewing Susie Clinkard.

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    Hi Susie, would you like to share with us how you came up with the idea for this book and what is the title?
    • Hello, AJ. Well, "Circuits" is called that because life is full of circles... you often end up repeating mistakes/relationship disasters/all sorts of things. It was written as a cathartic way of laying down some bad s**t in my life... and it worked; I feel much better! "S**t Happens" was named as it was said by a friend of mine's partner of 12 years when she asked him why he was sh***ing her best friend..."
    And do you plan your stories first with an outline or does it come to you as write it?
    • The stories come to me in a rough form, and gain flesh and blood as I write...
    So do you know the end of the story at the beginning?
    • Yes, but not the details...
    And what about the "people factor"? Do you have a process for developing your characters?
    • Yes, they are based either entirely, but usually only partially on people I have met or known.
    Well the cat's out of the bag now, I guess your friends will be thumbing through the book like mad, wondering ... Susie, it's often said that authors write themselves into their characters. Is there any part of you in your characters and if so, what they would be?
    • In both completed books, and in the 3rd, which is halfway through, there are aspects of me in characters...but never a complete, accurate portrayal of my character.
    Okay, so what's your favorite part about this book?
    • I like the beginning and the end in both books, and the start of my 3rd ("No Unnecessary Risks")...the end is going to be a corker, too!
    Susie, would you like to give us a brief summary of "Circuits"
    • Well, AJ, "Circuits" is 'chick-lit', "S**t Happens" is more thriller/horror...the genre I am happiest with.
    When in the process of writing your book did you begin to look for a publisher?
    • At the end of the first book, I sent it to a few and was accepted within a week by two of them. Publication wasn't a big deal for me...I write because I have to.
    What struggles have you had on the road to being published?
    • None... They wanted to charge me at first, but ended up only taking a small amount for artwork for the cover of "Circuits". Neither are charging for "S**t Happens"; (I had the good fortune to have two publishers after that, again, and this time they really like it and feel it will sell itself).
    Good fortune indeed. So what has been the best part about being published?
    • Nothing! Sorry, but I write because I love it, not for fame and fortune...I think maybe that is why my books sell?
    Well that's probably the best reason of all; no problems with that. What do you want readers to remember and carry with them after reading your novel?
    • A warm feeling that they've enjoyed a good read! As one friend said to me after reading "S**t Happens" for me last week..."I shall miss the characters!" That was really, really nice...
    It's great when that happens. It means you've hit the mark. And do you have plans to write another book?
    • I can't actually stop...the floodgates are open! The 3rd, "No Unnecessary Risks" is about child abduction and paedophiles...another thriller/horror.
    So where can readers find a copy of your book?
    • "Circuits" is available through Amazon, Play.com. or to order through bookshops (Athena Press). "S**t Happens" is out before Christmas...I haven't quite decided who this will be with... I need a publisher who will be prepared to take a book every 9-12 months or so from me, and I believe I might be accepting an offer from Dorrance.
    A nice position to be in. Do you have a website for readers to go to? Most readers like to be in contact with their favourite authors.
    • Underway at the moment...I write under Susie Clinkard, so watch this space!
    Susie, I wish you all the best. It shouldn't be too long before we see the next book on the shelves.
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    Enid Blyton reigns supreme

    10 MILLION copies a year and still going strong!

    I always knew it, I’ve always said it; now I’ve been vindicated.

    Enid Blyton was my favourite author when I was a kid. Everyone else has been telling me, “Who-ever believed what she wrote? It was such total make-believe.”

    Actually, I think the point is EVERYONE believed what she wrote. Didn’t you? I was enthralled by her books, I devowered them as fast as mum would buy them. Enid Blyton was a great storyteller.

    J.K. Rowling endured an unusual defeat on Tuesday when Enid Blyton was voted top of the poll to find Britain's best-loved author.

    Next came Roald Dahl, with Rowling actually sitting in third place.

    Enid has sold more than 500 million books and is best known for her "Famous Five" books and her incredible “Secret Seven” series.

    Critics have said her books are sexist, racist and simplistic. It shows how wrong they are. Enid Blyton’s stories remain very popular, still selling more than 10 million copies a year, each of them drawing readers into a previous world of untroubled kids and "beastly" grown-ups.

    I wish I could create something like she has. Hats off to Enid!

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    Sunday, 17 August 2008

    Author, Andrew, Davidson, makes good

    I thought you might like to hear this story about Andrew Davidson. It surely gives everyone encouragement. After all, it might just be you or me next!

    TORONTO – Author Andrew Davidson grew up in a small Manitoba town. As a teenager, Davidson began honing his writing style - which set him on a path that has culminated in his first novel. It is a story that has made the man from Canada the prize of the international publishing world.

    And what a prize!

    His first novel, ‘The Gargoyle’, was chosen by Doubleday U.S. for a massive $1.25-million advance and he signed separate deals with Random House Canada and the U.K.'s Canongate Books, as well as its Australian subsidiary. The privileges to the book have been sold in 20 countries.

    Davidson admits that the payout does make him feel “good.”

    Good? I'd feel bloody marvellous. Most first time authors get zilch until their book starts selling.

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    Is there a publisher who will look at my novel for nothing?

    • Anthony, is there somewhere I can have a publisher look at my novel for nothing?
      I've had good things said about it, and friends are saying I should get it published, but I don't know how to do it, or where to go. I don't want to spend too much money for someone to turn round and reject it.

    Well Eileen, it's good that people are saying nice things. It's a great boost to your ego.

    First off, don't ever think about paying to have your book published. The idea is that a publisher pushes money YOUR way, not the other way around. If anyone asks for money, it's a scam - run away. It should cost nothing

    To ensure your work isn't tossed onto the slush-pile before it's been looked at, it must be presented in the most proficient way you can. Let the publisher understand they're dealing with a professional person and they're more likely to give you a chance. See my blog http://ajbarnett-story.blogspot.com/search/label/submission%20guidelines to get the standard way to present your manuscript. There's no certainty they'll look at it even then, but without, it will be tossed to one side.

    You'll find a list of reputable publishers and agents in http://www.writersandartists.co.uk/ Just pick one to suit your genre. When you've selected an agent, or publisher (if you're sure they'll accept work without an agent), send a short, polite, letter of enquiry.

    However, before you even THINK of sending the letter of inquiry, check your work again and again. Be certain you've tied all those loose ends, that your grammar is okay, and that you've polished your manuscript until it shines.

    Then sit back and offer prayers.

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    Tuesday, 12 August 2008

    Is there an age limit for publishing

    • Anthony, how old must you be to publish a book? Can someone of 13 be accepted? My daughter seems to be quite talented and I'm thinking of sending her work off. The hype with Twilight has really sparked her.

    Well Anna, it's great to hear that your daughter is showing interest and ability. She certainly needs encouraging. However please be aware that you shouldn't give her false hopes. In a few years she might be ready, but in my view you might put her off forever if you push her into something she isn't ready for. If she's rejected (which she almost certainly will be), it might destroy her enthusiasm.

    There isn't a stipulated age limit to publish a book; it’s just that until a writer reaches maturity, its doubtful if the manuscript will be up to publishing standards.

    I’m sorry to be a wet blanket, but it’s unlikely that someone at the age of 13 would have sufficient facility, vocabulary or understanding of life to produce a viable book. They would be incapable of crafting a professional standard of work. No creditable publishing house would be interested.

    At that age, the writer would probably be reiterating work they have read elsewhere. They have no life experience to draw upon. Writers who put part of themselves into the work are the ones who write successful books. A youngster cannot do this - they simply haven't the background.

    Even fantasy books like the Twilight series by Stephenie Meyer, tap the author’s experiences, transferring emotions and feelings they’ve experienced in life, to the fantasy world. Very few adult writers are able to compete in the harsh world of book publishing, never mind children.

    There are some good, mature, writers out there, with plenty of experience, yet still don't manage to publish their books. I'm afraid it's a very aggressive business - certainly not for the nervous.


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    Thursday, 7 August 2008

    Promoting Books Online

    Tell Me A Story - promoting books

    I hate promoting books - so I'm always on the lookout for ways of promoting books that doesn't involve forcing my wares on people. Friends are looking out on my behalf as well I'm happy to say. At any rate, I had this list handed to me by a kind on-line friend, and thought you might like to share it. ,



    If you have anything to add, send it along, I'll slip it in - or start a new list if there are sufficient. Trying to publicize yourself is damn hard work, and anything that helps, has to be worthwhile. Let's help each other!

    • Blog on http://www.ecademy.com/module.php?mod=club&c=110
    • Submit your site to http://www.dmoz.org/
    • Submit your site to Google, MSN and Yahoo
    • Join several online social networks
    • Join several online communities or discussion groups
    • Add comments to other threads or blogs
    • Submit a blog to your own site
    • Use PPC advertising like Google Adwords
    • Try Ebay
    • Try http://www.elance.com/
    • Advertise on http://www.gumtree.com/
    • Advertise on http://www.craigslist.com/
    • Start your own ezine
    • Start your own web ring
    • Start your own community
    • Write your own e-book
    • Start your own affiliate program
    • Start your own reciprocal link exchange
    • Register for online networking events
    • Create a personal page on yahoo, aol or google
    • Write articles for other people’s ezines
    • Write articles for other people’s websites
    • Submit your articles to article directories
    • Submit your ezine to ezine directories
    • Do ad swaps with your ezine and other ezine owners
    I can't guarantee how effective these way of promoting are, I don't even know what all of them mean, but at least they are something positive in the bid towards promoting books.
    If any of you have success, let me know and I'll post it - in fact tell me which bit worked best and I'll give it an extra whiz!
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    A Summary of Storyline and outline

    Tell Me a Story
    • A STORYLINE places the accent on INDIVIDUALS. It is with regard to the consequence of the scene on the characters.
    • A STORYLINE summarizes your novel – something you might jot down in the first rush of enthusiasm.
    So what is an outline?
    • Your novel must occur in a coherent sequence. If a reader doesn’t believe part of the story, they’ll throw the book to one side. The OUTLINE allows you to plan this out.
    • AN OUTLINE is a section-by-section analysis; it acts as a route map through your book.
    • The OUTLINE provides a solid underpinning to your book. It is the foundation that allow you build with confidence.
    • An OUTLINE allows you the freedom to write any part of the book you like at any time you decide
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