Question - How do I get published?

Anthony, I'm not a writer, but have found myself writing a book. How do I get published?
I have looked on the interent, but there are so many publishing sites, I dont know what's good and what's not. Can you help ?

Clare, I'm afraid that as a new author you will need to live by the maxim to be not "As Good As" your favourite published authors. You have to be BETTER! The problem is, publishing houses will always go for the safe bet. They're in it to make money, not make you famous. They have a limited number of books they will publish each year. If yours isn't outstanding, I'm afraid you'll not get in, they'll reach for one of their stable of established authors.

To achieve this, you must first of all make sure your manuscript is as good as it can possibly be. Be absolutely certain you've tied all loose ends and make sure you've followed industry standards for presentation.

Edit out ALL unnecessary pronouns and adverbs - nothing screams amateur more than overblown descriptions. Most new writers feel they need to give full descriptions of everything in the book. DON'T. Sometimes what's left out says more than what's in....

When you've cut, cut, and cut; when you've polished it until it glistens, write a short query letter to your chosen publisher. Explain any experience you may have, the genre of the work, the word-count, and present a VERY short synopsis of about 100 words (see book blurbs for examples). Only present a full synopsis IF the publishing house asks you to submit the first three chapters.

In terms of an agent - it's almost as difficult to gain acceptance with a reputable agent as a publishing house. You must go through the same process.

You'll find lists of reputable agents and publishers in several trade oriented books such as Writers and Artist's Yearbook http://www.writersandartists.co.uk/ .

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An interview with author, Trevor Dalton

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This week I managed to persuade author, Trevor Dalton, to give an interview. He's a big lad, so I hope I get this right, I wouldn't want to end up in one of the horrible situations he dreams up for his novels.

Hi Trevor, to start off with, would you like to tell us how long you’ve been writing?

• Well Anthony, I started writing at 14 and my first book was ready for publication at age 21. It was a book of poetry called, "Blind visions of the Spectrum" It’s title is as pretentious as the poetry. I actually started writing novels in my 50's
  

So just how many books have you written so far?

• I've written two, "Possession Legacy." and "Open Tap.”

And just what was it that prompted you to write these particular books?

• Well, once I found my voice as a writer - it only took me forty odd years - the books just began to flow. I realised two basic truths. Write about where you know, and write about what you know; the rest as they say, takes care of itself.

Trevor, that couldn’t be more true. So your books, are they aimed mainly at men, women or children? Who ought to be searching them out.

• The books are aimed at any gender, but for late teens and above, they’re definitely not for children. Some of the contents is either borderline horror or a little raunchy for the younger market place.

And where are your books available from?

• My books are available from Amazon and most catalogues. If they don’t haveit in stock order it.

So, after all this, Is there any other work in the pipeline?

• Well, I guess I’m 63,000 words into the sequel to POSSESSION LEGACY, its called A DEEPER DARKNESS and picks up where POSSESSION LEGACY finished.

You sound as if you're well into it. Would you like to give us all an outline of your latest published book?

• I think the blurb says it best, Anthony, - “Where can the waste created by this technological age be disposed of. The by-products of our relentless advancement are often more detrimental than beneficial. The necessity for this "waste disposal" has given birth to a number of ruthlessly unscrupulous operatives. OPEN TAP traces the route taken by one such operative and the system he uses to dump the toxic concoctions he has collected.
  An abandoned puppy is exposed over a period to this malevolent concoction. As the puppy grows to adulthood, it develops a strange immunity to the poison it ingests. This immunity comes with a price tag, however. From Wales, Walsall and Worcester the characters in OPEN TAP begin their journeys to a final appointment with the beast that the puppy has become. They are all destined to meet. Some will die; some will live, but all their lives will change because of this encounter.

Wow Trevor, it sounds fantastic. I hope everyone out there rushes to Amazon and orders it right now.

• Yep! Me too, all of you get out there and do it.

Good luck with your sales, then. Keep in touch and let me know how you go on.

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Question - Conflict and Quarrels!

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AJ, I’m sorry to be a pain, but I’m still not really sure about conflict, what it is and what you mean by it. Can you explain it a little more? I mean, I sometimes read books and there’s no quarrelling or shouting in it, so where’s the conflict then?

Hi Eileen, thanks for visiting. Okay let’s take a deeper look.

What is this thing called conflict?
In one form or other conflict shapes the heart of every story, yet conflict doesn’t automatically mean quarrelling, in fact if that’s all the book is about it would be pretty boring.
Struggle
Conflict really boils down to struggle. Conflict can be divided into three main areas, the struggle between man and man, between man and himself, or between man and nature. Of these, the struggle between man and himself is sometimes the most poignant, the most heart-rending.

Conflict may concern what went before or what’s happening in the present-day; it may come about because of relationships and occupations, or devotion and dreams. Conflict can cause confusion and arguments, but remember; simply having your protagonists quarrelling is not enough. Conflict in books – as in life, should be multi-layered.

Emotion or events
Conflict can be internal – concerned with emotions, or it can be external – concerned with events. Often it can contain both. A relentless internal struggle can be underscored by external events and skirmishes, but remember, inner conflict makes your protagonists seem more realistic.

There will probably be several conflicts in the story, but there should be one and only one BASIC conflict that the story hinges on, and this must continue throughout the story right to the end. Often a story opens with this BASIC clash between protagonists. Their suspicions then give rise to all the other problems that occur through the novel. Minor conflicts are often resolved as the story progresses. The BASIC conflict should not be resolved until the end.

Don’t forget that in a book, conflict equals tension. Without tension the reader simply tosses the book to one side.

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Book Review Site

I keep meaning to do book reviews but never seem to find time.

I've found a lazy man's way around it. I came across a site today that gives independent reviews. They're not my choice of course, but they aren't driven by commercial dependence either, they're one person's view.

Take a look at http://tucsonguy.wordpress.com/

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A Look at Kindle

If you've seen Kindle advertised and wondered what it was all about, wonder no longer. I came across an independent review this morning.

I must say I was mightily impressed and am now wondering whether it's a worthwhile taking it further .... what if my book was on Kindle? Would it help? Time only can tell with these things, but I must say it's given me food for thought.

Take a look and see what your opinion is. I'd appreciate any feedback

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An Editor's View

• AJ, as editor of your novel, WITHOUT REPROACH, I've been following your blog with curiosity. I think this may be of interest to your readers. Tell me, what does it feel like to have a third party scrutinise your work?

Wow, Maureen, that’s a bit close to the old heartstrings. First off, you must realise writers are in awe of editors; we look upon you as a different species … beings who exist in ivory towers. We look to you for guidance, yet don’t want you to give it. We realise you’ll be correcting our silly grammar and spelling mistakes, but other stuff …
When it comes to submitting our work … well it’s as if we’re subjecting our sickly babe for analysis by a specialist – not wanting them to find anything wrong, yet knowing there’s no chance. We writers are fragile things, our manuscripts are precious and it’s a blow to our ego when something is wrong.

• So, what about when we make suggestions for slight changes? How do you feel then?

Sometimes, in my writing, I’ve assumed everyone will understand what I mean, but as you pointed out a few times, if YOU don’t get it, other people will have the same problem. In that respect, it’s good to have a professional opinion. I think writers develop a blind spot to their own work, and don’t see errors. That’s when people like you are vital.
I think it’s also important to have a professional editor verify timelines etc, in a novel. I know I was amazed at how much effort you put into the editing process. I hadn’t realised how many checks were made before putting a book to bed. I bow to your expertise.

• Thank you, AJ. As your editor, I want to wish you good luck with book sales.

Thanks Maureen, I think I need it. I hope we can chat on here again sometime.
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Author, Allie Boniface, to hold court in Kingston

If you’re lucky enough to live around Kingston, New Hampshire, and are one of those people who love to meet authors in the flesh, then this could be your lucky week.

On Wednesday, July 30, romantic author Allie Boniface will be attending the Nichols Memorial Library in Kingston, New Hampshire, where she intends to meet readers and talk about her book, Lost in Paradise.

Boniface said, "I've always loved regions surrounding Boston, especially New Hampshire's lakes and Seacoast communities. When I thought about where I wanted to set this story, the charm of a small town like Kingston immediately came to mind."

The novel, Lost in Paradise, investigates two characters who meet one summer in the fictional town of Paradise. Reviewers have called the novel "an emotional love story that draws the reader in".

Ms. Boniface currently teaches in the Lower Hudson Valley, N.Y. She is also the author of the romantic novels "One Night in Boston" and "One Night in Memphis".

Check her web at http://www.allieboniface.com/.

This event will be held from 6 to 8 p.m. on Wednesday, July 30, at the Nichols Memorial Library, located at 169 Main Street in Kingston. For more information, call (603) 642-3521.

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Writing Tips - Summary of the Plot

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Are you going off the rails, are you lost about what your plot should be doing? Look no further. Check out these simple rules and make sure your story follows them.

A plot should always contain:-

1. Action
2. Emotion
3. Balance
4. Tension
5. Momentum

Don't forget that your plot HAS to be plausible, yet larger than life

• Maintain a notebook of ideas and keep it at hand; it will help you plan your story
• If you get stuck, try rearranging other writer’s ideas
• At a basic level, your plot is simply an elaboration of the theme (see earlier post)
• Don’t ignore rules of cause and effect. Your plot must always be rational, don't let things happen without good reason.
• A plot should be based on what you know and are familiar with. If you don’t know, find out - do your research.
• Study other books to find how different authors conduct their plots - don't plagiarize - learn.
• Remember that there is no such thing as a new plot. Become skilled at dealing with old plots in fresh ways.

Follow these simple lines and you'll soon be on the right track

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An interview with author, Agnes Hall

I’m lucky to have several friends who are published authors. In fact a few of us share the same writing group in Jalón. I caught up with Agnes Hall a few days ago. She’s recently had a new novel released into the market place and is still on a high.

• I thought it might be good to share our conversation. Agnes, how long have you actually been a writer?

I only began writing after retiring to Spain. I suppose I started writing about 4 years ago. I attempted to write a thriller, with no tuition whatsoever and realised after attending a creative writing class run by a published author, Jill Lanchbery, that I needed some guidance starting at layout before even attempting the content. Jill and I eventually started a Writing Group here in the valley where we live and I have learnt a great deal both from Jill and other members of the group.

• So is this your first book, or have you published others?

Yes, the first! Apart from the beginning of the thriller.

• And did you dive straight into a full-length book or did you publish other articles/stories first?

I have had nothing published prior to this. I have attempted short stories and my 'greatest' achievment was to have one short story long-listed in a Fish Publishing Competition. Short stories were a good way to start for me personally and allowed me to build up confidence.

• That's what I keep telling new writers. I think short stories are a good way to cut your teeth. I wrote for magazines for about fourteen years before turning back to novels. So what prompted you to write this particular story? Does it convey any special 'messages' to the reader?

It's the old chestnut of writing about what you know. The story centres around Liverpool and Ireland. Being the daughter of Irish parents and spending the first twenty years of my life in Liverpool gave me the basis of my story. Relationships, I think are the same whatever the period and my story begins around 1900.

• And is the story aimed mainly at men or women. What genre would you classify it in?

The story is aimed at both men and women. Male friends who have read it have enjoyed it. As for genre...It is a 'family saga'. My main comment in retrospect is that I think that
I have tried to pack too much into one book. I think that all the characters and relationships could be expanded.....perhaps the next book could do this!

• I think we all wish we'd done things differently, Agnes. You're not alone, it's the bane of a writers life. We're never satisfied with our work. So, was much research involved, did you have to study anything before you completed the story?

There was a reasonable amount of research required. The story talks about the potato famine in Ireland, the conditions of poverty in which the Irish peasant farmer lived, the
English/Irish problems and also spans two world wars...as I said, perhaps I could expand on all this in another book.

• Okay, time for a little push for your book. Who is your publisher, is your book available yet, and if so, where?

'The Canvas Bag' is published by Libros International and is currently available on Amazon and associated sites. There are plans afoot for all libros' authors' works to reach the shelves of some of the major U.K. bookstores e.g Waterstones.

• That'll be brilliant. Would you like to tell everone a little about the writer's circle? How did it evolve, what are the aims?

The writers circle in which I am involved began with Jill Lanchberry and myself getting together to try and get and give feedback from and to other writers. The main aims are to encourage and support and give positive criticism of each others work. Apart from works in progress being discussed, we also have workshops which are often a useful tool to get one's brain thinking in a different way. We meet twice a month and the topics are varied and include not just writing and discussing each others work but everything that goes with writing such as sales and marketing etc. One of the things that we have all found amazing on set projects is that given one topic, the variety of work that arises.

• That's authors for you - no two minds think alike. Okay Agnes, have you any other books in the pipeline?

I have 2 other books in the pipeline at the moment...apart from what might arise as sequels to 'The Canvas Bag'. The first has a working title of 'A Seafaring Man and A Nice Cup of Tea' the second 'Rasberry Summer, I will not tell you what they are about yet...WATCH THIS SPACE!

• Wow! Sounds like you've been busy already. I wish I was so far in front. Right then, Agnes, at this point I generally ask guests to give one piece of advice aspiring authors. What would yours be?

Try and be disciplined....I am not and I know that my next two books would be a lot further on if I allocated a specific time each day to work at my writing.
If anyone wants to contact me they can email me on agneshall@terra.es. My website is not fully constructed yet.

• That's great stuff, Agnes. Thanks for taking the time. I'm sure everyone will have found this inspiring. Good luck with your book sales. Let's talk again soon.

Jockey writes début novel

Ex- jockey, Kris Prather's professional racing career, was called to a halt by injuries. Now she's following her other obsession, writing.

Prather recently published her début novel, "The Horse Tamer's Niece."

Kris makes every effort to impress by drawing on her racing knowledge in her novel. She hopes it's the first book in a series.

Do we have another Dick Francis in the making?

I wish her well.

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Does Age Matter When Submitting a Manuscript?

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AJ, I have two questions. I've heard from various people that some publishers make their choices based on the genre of the book that they are reviewing. My book is, well, it's trying to be fantasy (I'm still in the process of writing it and I should be done in at least five months if I keep working on it consistently). I was just wondering, is that statement true or false? And the last question is should I wait until I'm older to try and get it published? I know I don't know much now, and I'm thinking my thoughts on things may change, but I'm more worried that they won't accept my literature because of my age regardless if it's good or not. Libby J.

Libby J, it's certainly true you should be sure the publisher accepts books in your genre. It would be a complete waste of your time and their's to send a horror story, to a publisher who specializes in romantic suspense ... The best thing to do is check for suitable publishing houses in a trade book such as Writers' and Artists' Yearbook They describe who publishes what, and how to write a letter of submission. They also give information on reputable agents, which might be useful.


In terms of age, publishing houses don't normally question how old an author is. They'll only be interested in whether your work is up to scratch. My main concern is whether you have sufficient maturity of writing. You'll probably be up against writers who have years of experience, so be prepared for rejection - but having said that, rejection happens no matter what the age. It's an unfortunate fact of a writer's apprenticeship.


You certainly show signs of maturity in posing questions about your age and ability, so maybe you ARE ready. I certainly wish you well.
Good luck.

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Rounding the Plot

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Okay, so this is your first story and you're full of excitement. Your novel sets off with a cracking idea, which is of course your main conflict - it is isn't it? So, what to do next?

Now you must engineer, in the most natural way you can, one fascinating problem after another. There must be nothing contrived about them, no coincidences, misunderstandings, or Acts Of God. The problems should come in a sequence of highs and lows, one sub-plot interweaving with another.
The most extraordinary point of your plot should not be reached until immediately before the end of your novel.

At this point, all subplots should be well out of the way. This ultimate peak of drama should come about only from the main conflict.

Coupled with, and part of, this extraordinary point, should be the darkest moment of the story.
The central characters must seem to be up against a wall, but make sure you don't make this absolute dilemma so Byzantine there is no way out. Each time you dream up a situation, scrutinize it. Work out how it affects the protagonists, and the previous and following parts of the plot.
Your reader must be persuaded there is no way to resolve the dilemma – until suddenly, wham, bang, all is unravelled and the story is over. Do it quickly. Tie up all loose ends, leave no threads hanging.

So it's the end. It’s all over and the book is finally closed. Your reader MUST now be absolutely satisfied the protagonists have conquered every problem.
Readers should feel that your novel was about credible people facing tolerable difficulties who found rational solutions. If they don't, you're in trouble!

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Write about What You Know

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Write about things you know.

If you don’t know what it is you want to write about, you sure as hell should find out BEFORE starting to write – get out and do your RESEARCH!

Read more about it here on BUKISA

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Form and Proportion

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All plots must have form and proportion. The story must have balance. Stories that are in balance are beautiful, get it wrong and things start to look ugly.

1. A plot should never be a tirade of devastation and emotional distress. Readers soon get fed up of things like that, they feel worn out.
2. Readers need to equate with characters. You make this rapport possible by making sure the events COULD happen in that type of situation.
3. The pace of the plot should vary. Some scenes must be more tranquil than others.
4. After a chapter dealing with an important incident, give your readers time to recover by composing a slower paced scene .... not a dull scene of course, but one with fewer contrasts, fewer ups and downs.
5. Make your plot compatible with life but LARGER than life.

Give your readers interesting and believable variation and if you're lucky, they’ll give you time.

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Writing Competitions

For those adventurous spirits who like to enter contests, I've spotted a couple on the web (Places For Writers) that be of interest. If you enter them, let me know how you go on.

New online Cdn mag seeks flash fiction
15 June 2008 Link
New online flash fiction journal, Glossolalia is accepting flash fiction submissions for its opening edition (published September 2008). Not obligatory theme: Deviation. 500 words max. Some submissions considered for Glossolalia's 2008 Summer Flash Fiction contest. First prize: US$200; second prize: US$100. No entry fee.Deadline: August 15, 2008.

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New contest seeks unique literary voices
15 June 2008 Link

New deadline. Pop Montreal and Matrix Magazine are looking for fiction and poetry entries for the Matrix Litpop Award. Categories: Fiction (5000 words max.) and Poetry (up to 5 poems). Prize: a round-trip ticket to Pop Montreal from October 1-5, 2008, a VIP pass, accommodation, publication in Matrix Magazine with full honorarium, and presentation at a special Matrix Litpop event.

Entry fee: $25. Deadline: July 15, 2008. More details...

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Question - How to get published

Hi Anthony, I've been working on a book for about a year. I plan to write a sequel and to get them both published. How do I go about doing that? I want it as inexpensive as possible. How much do you usually get from the sale of your book?

Angie, this is a somewhat similar question to a recent one. Once your book has been polished as much as you can - once you've cut away all purple crap .... when you're sure everything has been corrected, then send a query letter to a publishing house.

Ask permission to submit your book. Give the genre, word count and a brief synopsis, then sit back and pray like there's no tomorrow.

If they like your work, they might ask you to send the first three chapters. Your work must be submitted to the industry standard, of double type space etc, (see my post http://ajbarnett-story.blogspot.com/2008/04/conform-or-else.html for full explanation of their requirements).

There will be no cost to you to publish through 'normal' publishing routes. Editorial costs will be met by the publishing house (but your work will be expected to be at a reasonable level before being accepted)

If you're planning to self-publish (paper or ebook), you might be interested in an interview I gave with author, James Melzer, ( http://ajbarnett-story.blogspot.com/2008/05/interview-with-author-james-melzer.html ) who's going down the path of publishing with Lulu. He gives the breakdown costs and talks of his experience.

Royalties on sales vary with each publishing house and range from 7% to 12% of sale price. Royalties with self-published books are set by yourself and you'd need to check what other writers of the same genre are selling their books at.

Hope this helps a little.

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New Resorce for Californian Writers

“A Community of Writers and Artists” is what Diane Mierzwik and Kris Cirullo call their new centre for writers and artists in Yucaipa, California. It apparently has an ambience deliberately designed to help the old creative juices flow.

The opening of “THE WRITERS GALLERY” at 12054 First St. in Yucaipa was deemed a success. Many people interested in the new resource vied to be the first to see what it was all about. To help the writers, Mierzwik, has made available a set of useful references such as online Writer's Market and numerous other assets that play an essential role in the artistic and writing world.

It’s a spot where disruption is rare, yet questions can be raised, to be answered by a published author who has “been there and done that” and is willing to help others get their ideas published.

Good on 'em. I wish them success. Anything that helps new writers on their way has to be applauded.

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What next?

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Hello Anthony, I have almost finished my first novel, what are the next steps I need to take to get published, become successful, and make lots of money?

Make lots of money? Wow, hang on there a moment, Joanne. Very few novelists make sufficient money to live on - most have to keep their day jobs to survive. However, you might be the exception, so take heart.

1. The first thing is to put your book in a drawer for a month or so. At the moment it’s all too fresh in your mind. Take a breather, write something completely different and recharge your mind.
2. Next, check it over it with a specialist eye, do your editing. Check spelling and grammar, chop, cut, and slash unwanted bits.
3. Remember that sometimes it's what you don't say that makes a novel great and has readers turning the pages.
4. Make sure there are no purple bits, cut out all adverbs and adjectives unless you're confident you can't do without them. Over-writing makes your work look unprofessional.
5. After all this refinement, once your work shines, send a letter of submission to an agent. Make it short, polite and to the point. Include genre, word count and a short synopsis (look to book blurb for an example) don’t plead, don't promise, just ask respectfully and you MIGHT get a reply.
   

Be prepared to suffer rejections though, all authors do. As for money.... according to the grapevine, out of 150,000 books published each year, 100,000 will not sell more than 100 copies. Money? Hardly! Sorry, but the majority of novelists don't get rich.

YOU might just be the exception though. I wish you luck.

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Harness That Gift

Tell Me a Story - writing advice

Anthony, I've a problem. I have a story floating around in my head. I know the character's names and what I want in the story- but every time I try to write something- it just doesn't feel right, its weird. As I start to type, I seem to loose interest. In a weird way I want to write-but for some reason, I can't.

Thanks for the email, Kiba. There are a few things you can do that might help. First you need to be sure you really want to write. If you do then nothing should stop you. Don't let anything get in your way.

1. If you want to be serious, the first thing you should do is beg, buy, or borrow, a couple of books on creative writing. All writers need to get to grips with the basics of story telling. The idea of writing may seem like a fire burning into your soul, but unless that fire is fed with the oxygen of skill, those flames will fade and die.
2. A textbook on creative writing will show you the right way to tackle your story and help you to become fruitful. You'll appreciate the why and wherefore of what you're doing.
3. Artists in every genre - dancers, painters, musicians, all have to learn before they can harness their unrefined gift. They study for YEARS before they find success. They all display flair in the first place of course, but without direction that flair will flounder. Writers are just the same.
4. You should stop listening to lay people. You’ll probably find a lot of friends offering advice - telling you how good you are - telling you where you're going wrong..... forget it. Listen ONLY to skilled writers or editors. Friends and family can be too enthusiastic or too critical – they won’t look at it with a qualified eye – they’re too close to you.
5. If you're really serious you should join an online Writer’s Circle. They're free, friendly, and full of like minded people - some with years of experience to tap into and take advantage of.
6. You should try to find a local writer's group - mixing with other writers will work wonders for your morale, they’ll offer good advice and give a professional critique to your work. you'll soon start to feel like a real writer - what more could you want?
   

Hope this helps you on your way a little. Don't give up, don't get dispirited - just keep writing and one day it will happen.

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How Many Times to Edit?

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AJ, how many times professional writers edit? I was under the impression that professional authors would edit a piece upwards of 10 times before it appears in print.
My friend, however, who has read many interviews with writers, thinks that most professional authors revise only a couple of times before they are done and sometimes don't even do any. I'm confused.

Thanks for writing in, Alice. It's no use submitting a piece of work that you're not happy with. ALWAYS edit until you're satisfied. If you ain't happy, gal, the publisher sure as hell won't be ....

When I'm writing I check over the previous couple of pages before I start (and generally spot something to correct); but reading the previous days work puts me into the correct frame of mind - keeps me on track.
Once my precious work is complete, I edit numerous times. I really can't say how many, probably five or six complete checks. I ruthlessly chop away all excess baggage, every word has to count otherwise it's thrown out.
I check grammar, spelling, timelines, and such things as consistency of names and words (don't use mister at one point and Mr. at another). I make sure all loose ends are tied up, and that all changes have been smoothly incorporated.

As an aside, on the morning that Without Reproach was to be handed over to the publisher, I changed the whole of the first three pages - PANIC!!!
Leaving a story in a raw state.
Some writers brag on internet sites that they don't edit - they claim that editing robs the story of life. I've NEVER subscribed to the idea of a story being at it's best whilst it's RAW.
I shudder at the thought my work in it's raw state. In my opinion that's a lazy writer making excuses ... but when their stories are rejected they say it's because the publisher doesn't understand their ART. Rubbish!
Good editing is what moves a story from the realms of amateur scribblings into that of a professional piece of work.
Polishing your work is vital to make it acceptable to a reader. Hone, hone and hone again. Make your work gleam before offering it to the public - they'll tear it to pieces if you don't.

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My Internet Interview

I was interviewed recently by Canadian author and blogger, James Melzer. I'm generally on the other side of the fence, and I must say I found it an odd experience. I've come to the conclusion that I'd rather ASK questions than answer them, I'm a listener, not a talker you see. Maybe that's why I use written words so much.

I've been interviewed live on radio, which I absolutely hated. I've had a couple of telephone interview with newspaper reporters from the UK and an on-the-spot-live radio interview over the telephone.

I'm not good at interviews. I'm quite shy really, not at my best when under the spotlight. TV presenters be warned!!!! If you want to grab me, a stiff drink will be in order.

I'd love you to visit James' blog at http://jamesmelzer.net/ and let me know your thoughts. I think he's a good guy.

Contact route as usual at the top of the page.

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Creating Tension

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AJ, how did you create tension in your novel? I couldn't stop reading PAST SINS. I simply HAD to find out what happened next. How can I create something similar, my stories always seem to fall flat?

That's very kind of you, Mary. Thank you. I've compiled a short list for creating tension, that is at least a starting point.

1. The goals of the main protagonists should be at odds.
2. Each of the main characters must be struggling to reach their individual aims, independent of, and at the expense of the other.
3. The route your protagonists take in achieving their aims becomes the source of action. You should make a meal of it; take full advantage.
4. The plot should have an emotive aspect. It should always be dynamic.
5. Strong feeling shouldn’t merely be related in characters; show by reactions, don't tell.
6. It’s the emotion that you invoke in your readers that counts.
7. It’s essential you understand the feelings you wish to stir in your reader before you write. You must write with that emotion in mind at all times.
8. The theme of the story should be one about which you care deeply.
9. You must be affected by your characters, be caught up with what happens to them.
10. Unless you believe in your characters and equate with their struggle, you may as well dump the whole idea. Your work won’t have the oomph that tempts people to turn pages.

Coupled with the above, a time constraint can also help in creating tension. Having to acomplish something before some consequence affects the characters is always a nail-biter. Hope this helps a little.

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Writer's Gadget!

Ever on the lookout for gadgets and widgets, I came across this wonderful little site http://www.creativity-portal.com/prompts/imagination.prompt.html It's supposed to be an imagination stimulant.

By clicking the button a seemingly endless stream of little prompts jump to the screen to stir the old mind juices. I can see it being quite useful if your mind gets stuck in a tramline.
They claim it helps you to 'think outside the box'. It might even help if you suffer from the dreaded writer's block, but that remains to be seen.

Give it a whiz, even if only for fun. It's a great little diversion, need I say more.

Let me know how you get on.

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Fun Writer Gadet

For those of you having trouble getting started with your next story or if you have writer's block. Here's a brilliant little tool. It gives hilarious results. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Click here to give it a whiz ... let me know how you go on!

http://www.geoffrey.com.au/story.htm

Quite basically, it's an automatic story generator - something that could quite easily put us all out of work ....

I've no idea who's produced it, except he calls himself Geoffrey. Good luck to you sir. You're a genius. You quite made my day!

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There's a Chance After All.

There's hope for all first time writers.

It gladdens my heart when I pick up news like this. In the old 'Down Under' regions, in beautiful New Zealand, writer Mary McCallum has made it. Her début novel, 'The Blue' has been selected into the finals in the fiction category for the Montana New Zealand Book Awards.

So for everyone punching out their first scribbling, your first novel might just do the same. For the talented few, it seems it can still happen .

The Wellington writer's debut novel is up against Laurence Fearnley, for Edwin & Matilda, Alice Tawhai, for Luminous, and Charlotte Grimshaw, for Opportunity.

Ms. McCallum has been a broadcast journalist in New Zealand and Europe, and is now a freelance writer and reviewer.

She is one of five Wellington finalists in the country's most prestigious literary awards. I wish her well. I know the other writers won't appreciate my comments, but the idea of a new novel hitting the high spot fills me with hope.

Good on you sport! I wish I could join you.

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A 30 second Review

Just finished reading James Melzer's 'The Vegetarian'. I was very impressed. Don't usually read this genre, but I really couldn't stop.

The story falls into horror, yet not scarily so. It was an interesting concept, well thought out. It moved between past and present using flashbacks with an ease that only a talented writer can manage. The central character earns money by volunteering as a medical guinea-pig...


Try a download or better still purchase the hard copy. Both available from Lulu Storefront - http://www.lulu.com/jamesmelzer

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Finding That Plot

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AJ, can you PLEASE let me in on the secret of finding decent plots. I've been struggling and am getting nowhere?

Hi Jean. Thanks for the email. If you're unbelievably lucky, a plot will appear to you fully formed. This rarely takes place - okay Stephenie Meyer might have done it, but don't count on it.... Don’t despair though, there are other sources. Try these as starters.

• Refer to the ‘Agony Aunt’ columns in magazines; you'll find they'll fill you with ideas for stories.
• Go to your library and read the blurb from some books in your genre and work them into your own. Don’t pinch a complete plot from a published book though; use them as launch-pad for your own. Plagiarism is frowned upon.
• Checkout the Personal Column in newspapers. They can be a rich source of plots and ideas.
• Read the Obituaries, as macabre as it seems, there might just be something lying around in there that triggers you off.
• When you’re reading a bedtime story to the kids think about ‘maturing’ the plot, can it be brought up to date?
• Fairy tales, myths, and legends offer a good supply of plots that can be adapted.
• Take a published story, rearrange the plot, make male protagonists female and you’ll start the ball rolling in your head.

One more thing. Don’t wait to find an ultra unique plot. There’s not much chance of finding one after all these years. Just settle for a damn good, well-written story.

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Conflict and Theme, Eternal Bedmates

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I've received another query, this time about the difference between theme and conflict. It seems to cause problems, yet it's basically quite simple.

Okay, so I've already touched on theme in Writing Tips - The Theme of Things. It's important to get it right though, so I thought I'd expand on it a little and list things down. We all like lists, don't we .... so much tidier.

Theme

• Theme provides the basic structure for your novel. Think of it as the skeleton upon which the body of the story will hang. Without it, the body simply won’t stand up.
• EVERY person and EVERY occasion in your plot should be linked to the theme in some way or other or it doesn't deserve to be in there.
• Theme should always have its roots in strong feelings.
• Without passion there is no story.
• You should be able to encompass the theme in a short sentence. Think along the lines of how a Chinese proverb is constructed. This will give you an idea of how to encompass theme.
• Make a little proverb from it, or use an existing proverb if you will.
• Theme is what the whole of your narrative hangs on.

Conflict

• Conflict is the foundation upon which every story is built. Use the theme to carry it along.
• Conflict can be between man and man, man and himself, or man and nature (use woman as man where appropriate - no PC here). Sometimes man’s inner turmoil with himself can be most poignant.
• There must be frequent tension in your novel, even when the conflict is not observable.
• The conflict should ALWAYS be plausible.
• The intensity of conflict should VARY throughout the story. There's nothing worse than overdoing tension. If you don't give time for readers to take breath, they'll be exhausted.

Hope this helps to sort things out.

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Writer's Workshop!

Here's a quick one for you that I've just picked up.

For those of you in the UK lucky enough to live in the vicinity, a writer's workshop will be held at the Bromyard Centre with successful author, Manda Scott in tenure.

The session, on Wednesday, June 25 will be between 10am and 4pm, and costs absolutely NOTHING!
I believe it's an initiative on the part of the National Year of Reading by the grace of forward thinking, Herefordshire Council.

I wish more councils would take the same initiative. Writing just doesn't get the same backing as other arts. It deserves more .... and don't give me the shit that writers get paid for their work. Most writers make sod-all. It's a labour of love. It's like any art, only the succesful make anything out of it. Everyone else needs subsidy.

Any wannerbe interested, will need to produce an example of their work (1 poem, or approximately 300 words of literature).

For more information, visit www.herefordshire.gov.uk/libraries. I understand that reservations are necessary as places are restricted.

So get clicking!

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Preventing writer's block

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As an engineer, I’ve always preached that planning prevents problems – and this is equally true of writing as anything else in life.

Read this article. Overcoming writer's block

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New Authors.

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It's a shit, but it's a fact!

It's many times more difficult to sell a brilliant book by a new author than it is to sell a rubbish one by a popular author. The exceptional book by a new author must fight its way against enormous odds. There are in excess of 150,000 new publications each year. Most new authors fall by the wayside.

The new author has to assert themselves and stand on their own merit. A book by a popular author already has an awaiting readership.

Publicity.

There are several things significant in making a hit of a book: first, the celebrity status of the author; second, the uniqueness of the plot; third, the extent of the publicity, and fourth, how central the topic is to the reader.

Most new writers have no celebrity status, but it pisses me off when they do. Okay, so I'm envious of them, I make no bones about it. In general their writing is crap so why should they make it when thousands of hard-working writers don't.

Unique?

A unique plot .... well that's down to the author. I suppose we all feel our work is unique .. but is it?

Publicity! Don't make me laugh. What publishing house is going to pour a tight publicity budget into an unknown? They're in it to make money not become popular with writers. They boost profits by pushing the popular writer.

Let's play tag.

So I guess it's down to topic, and it's down to us to let our readers know how topical our work is. We have to push whatever's in our book - make hay out of every strand of grass in it. Let the readers know what's in there .... how?

Well Amazon can help. Use the 'Tag' function to guide readers. Let them know about the little gems inside YOUR book. Play the system, they won't mind because it'll boost their profits as well as yours.

And like all authors, I could do with a hand, so if you feel like helping, next time you're on Amazon, just look up Without Reproach and tick my tags. It won't cost you anything, but it'll help me no end..... And if you want me to do the same for you, just drop a line.....

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Hedonistic Heart of Miami

It seems that author, Brian Antoni has attracted critical attention, if not high literary praise, for his fictionalized memoir of life and sex, and love and sex, and chocolate and sex, in Miami's hedonistic heart of darkness in the 1990s.

Don't we all do that. In hindsight, don't we all think that our experiences were golden and special. They seem to grow with the passing as well. Each year brings fonder memories, we were more dangerous, more exciting, more special, than anything today!!!!

Most of us curb the desire to embellish it on paper though. Antoni's first book, Paradise Overdrive, was based on his experiences living the "Bahamian high life." South Beach: The Novel, is his second attempt.

Maybe his memory has improved!

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The Perceptive Notebook

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The first fundamental for writers is to be perceptive. Yet, some writers are so caught up with their novel, that time away from it is spent in oblivion. They don’t really take in what’s happening around them. If only they’d come out of that trance, they’d find inspiration jumping at them.

Ideas are fleeting.

Ideas are fleeting. Sod’s Law says we’ll have the most brilliant idea when there isn’t time to jot it down. I know, it’s happened to me more than once. I’m confident I won’t forget it, it’s so important how could I? But forget I do, and it’s exasperating. Knowing I’ve had the inspiration of the century, but can’t bring it to it mind, pisses me off.

Ideas seem to come at the most inopportune moment, usually when we don’t have a notebook. Author, Mary Wibberly, has apparently solved the problem in the past by jotting it down on the cover of her chequebook – bankcards have seen that off though. It’s difficult scribbling on plastic.

Important conversations

I’m considering buying one of those digital voice recorders and stuffing it in my pocket. At least that way I’ll be able to record those all-important conversations – much more convenient than scribbling illegible notes whilst talking.

I suppose the moral is, always carry a notebook and you won’t forget that all-important idea! The problem is, forgetting to put it in our pockets …

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Ultimate Book Publicity

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We all want to make the most of our precious books and novels. We desire attention, we search for publicity. Some go a step further than the rest. One particular Indonesia author has taken the ultimate step in attracting attention.

Cash everywhere.

Publicity seeking, Tung Desem Waringin, circled his plane over a soccer field in the city of Serang, about 40 miles west of Jakarta, and emptied several bags of cash.

Apparently the businessman is reknowned for publicity stunts. This time he deposited about $10,700, from an aircraft to promote his new book.

Pandemonium.

Below, there was pandemonium. Grown men snatched bills from youngsters. Excited children ran around, holding up the notes they picked up, trying to hang onto them.

One man clung onto a hat he'd stuffed with money. Another sat in a corner of the field, massaging his feet after a dash for cash.

It's all very well, but I thought we were in this to make a penny not give thousands away!

Ideas blown apart.

If I had spare cash to throw away like that, I probably wouldn't write in the first place. Most of us are merely struggling hacks, churning away for scraps. Sometimes, I when I look at book sales, I wonder if it's worthwhile .... then along comes Tung Desem Waringin, and everyone's ideas are blown apart!

I don't know whether to wish him luck or not. I hope the idea doesn't catch on!

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Writing Tips - Using That Experience

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Hello Anthony, can you help. I'm thinking to write my biography. I've undergone things in my life that I'm sure others will want to read. How do I go about it?

Hi Brian, nice to hear from you.

Please don't think I'm pouring cold water on your idea, but unless you're already a celebrity, chances are that few people will be interested. It's a hard fact of life. Sometimes it's the wrong idea to use a circumstance(s) from your own life as the basis for a book. Instead, think novel.
It can be better to use the feelings generated by an experience as a theme rather than the circumstance itself.
The consequence can be a richer story than you might have envisaged because you've already explored the emotional boundaries.
Sometimes you can be too close to a particular episode and it can warp your writing. Instead, use those feelings, tap into the energy of the evocative experience, expand on it, push it in a different area and the result can be POW!
Unless we're TV presenters, film-stars, radio personalities, or have achieved something incredible, who's going to be interested in reading about our lives? Everyone has problems they overcome, we all do things with our lives. It can be a bit egotistical to think that others will find our own life interesting.
I normally advise people to weave the things they've undergone into a piece of fiction, breathe life into a novel with those experiences. Use it as a backbone and who knows, you could have the next best-seller.

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Romantic Suspense

Jakarta Takes the Lead

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Writers, readers, publishers, take a look at this!

A publishers group has set up a book center in Jakarta with the aim of encomapassing the whole of their publishing industry. Maybe someone over at this end ought to be taking a damn good look at doing the same for us! Good luck to 'em, I say!

For more read this Jakarta Takes Lead

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So, You're a Wannerbe Writer!

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Anthony, could I take a collection of my writing, compile them together and turn that into a book just like some bloggers do?

Wow! Now hold on there. Success in all the arts is a long and dusty road I'm afraid. Only the determined stick it out. Sometimes I wonder if that's what the publishers are looking for .... staying power.

There are no shortcuts except for the very lucky. Disregard all stories you hear of overnight successes that certain blog-writers have had, it just ain't gonna happen again. All the authors I know, have served some sort of apprenticeship to the pen. Not all have a formal education by any means, but all have thoroughly earned their spurs.

There are milliions of writers out there, all of them chasing the same dream. Publishers know this and can afford to be choosy, so be warned. However, said that, please don't be put off, I just want you to be prepared for hard work, and to study the techniques invloved. Nobody just sits down and writes a successful book. There are standards to meet, methods to learn.

There are numerous text-books on the subject, and you should read at least a couple to see the writing world from differing perspectives. No artist in any field, ever found success without understanding everything there was to know about the subject. Writers are no different.

Join an on-line writer's circle such as http://www.mywriterscircle.com/ , get in contact with like-minded people and you'll receive encouragement and help. Read as many blogs on the subject as you can, pick up hints and tips and see what other authors talk about.

Absolutely immerse yourself in the world of writing, and one day, just maybe, you might just get lucky. But until then .... stick at it .... and good luck!

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Book Award

It's always good to hear of someone succeeding. Well here's one author that really made top grade. Take a bow, sir!

History professor Marcus Rediker has won the $50,000 George Washington prize for his study of the slave trade in his book "The Slave Ship: A Human History."

A story like this must have taken years of research and he justly deserves the award. Good on yer mate! I wish you well.

I'm just glad we ain't competing, I hate being a loser!!!!

The distinguished prize, given each year for the best book written about the era of the Founding Fathers, is one of the largest and most prestigious book awards in the US.

For the full story in the Washington Post please click below

http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2008/05/29/AR2008052903986.html



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Writing Tips - A Cut in Time

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I was recently asked advice about getting a book published. The writer had been working on a book for over a year and was worried about the time taken, asking was it their responsibility to hire an editor to correct the manuscript.

I have to say, first off, a year is NOT too long to be working on a book, it’s about par for the course, some take several years, especially a début, when you're striving for perfection.

Hone, hone, and away.

If you’ve invested all that time and effort in the writing, why not take a little more time to re-read and polish it until it shines. Adopt a professional eye and hone away ALL unnecessary adverbs and adjectives, before thinking about sending to a publishing house. Nothing screams amateur more than purple prose. Cut, cut and cut again. I know you're losing words, but you're gaining quality. It's far better to have a thousand words less but accepted, than a thousand words more rejected.

If your manuscript is accepted, the PUBLISHING house will assign an editor to make sure your book meets their high standard, it's their responsibility.

Professional critique.

However, that said, you might purchase the services of an external editor if you want a professional critique (someone like Hilary Johnson - find her on the web) before you submit your work. This service will cost approx one hundred pounds for the first three chapters - only use them if you really don’t understand what's wrong with your work.

A lower level of critique but quite genuine, can be found for free in most on-line writer’s circles such as My Writers Circle - but don't expect to submit a whole novel, just a taster.

Can it be better?

When you’re certain you can’t make your manuscript any better, trundle down to your local library, borrow ‘The Writer’s Handbook” and make a note of publishing houses who publish your genre. There seems to be a gathering trend in the UK and almost certainly in the USA to go through a publishing agent, but the same process should be adopted.

Send the selected publishing house or agent a short note asking if they'd be kind enough to read your manuscript. Enclose a very brief synopsis of your book (look to the blurb on a book jacket for guidance), explain the number words it contains, and what genre you've written. A longer synopsis should only be sent if they ask to see the first three chapters.

Then sit back and pray.

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Rule and Damn Rules

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Writing rules are sometimes broken .... but only by the foolhardy, or those who know exactly why they're doing it.

Talent.

To succeed at writing you must of course, have natural talent. Without talent there will be nothing no matter how hard you try. It might sound obvious, but you must also be an avid reader, you must love reading. If you don't read you can hardly write.... however, there are techniques that you must be aware of.

Try some of the links below

Right Write - 8 Cool Tips To Invoke Emotion And Write Right
Story Brief - Balance, Proportion And Plot In Your Story Brief
To Write A Story - 20 Ways To Write A Story Better

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