Thursday, 22 May 2008

An interview with author, James Melzer

James Melzer is a relatively new friend of mine but he's one of those people who make you feel as if you've known him forever. He's recently finished a book and hopes to have it on the market soon. I caught up with him a few days ago and thought it might be a good idea to share his knowledge.


James, just how long have you been into writing? Is it a new thing or has it developed?

  • I've been a writer for as long as I can remember. It seems that from an early age I was always putting things down on paper, stories and whatnot. It hasn't been until recently that I thought I could eventually make some sort of career out of it.


For more please read Interview With James Melzer

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Wednesday, 21 May 2008

Writing Tips - You NEED Query Letters

"AJ can you help, I've just finished my novel and was thinking of sending the manuscript to a publisher in PDF format. Is this alright or do I have to send the printed version? I'll be sending it to another country, so it could end up costly? What should I do please?"
Mark, let's make it clear; you should never send a manuscript to any publisher without first being invited. A growing number of publishers only deal with agents, so check that out as a first priority.
If the publishing house accepts manuscripts without an agent intermediary, you should send a polite letter (email) of enquiry asking permission to send the first three chapters for approval.
The letter (email) should include the word-count, your writing experience (plus any success, no matter how limited) and the genre of your work. At this early stage, include a very SHORT synopsis of your book - about 100 words or so (look to the blurb on a novel to get a feel of what to put).
IF you are invited to tender part of your manuscript, you should again include the above information, together with a slightly longer synopsis, but no more than two pages of A4 in length.
For guidelines on submissions see earlier post http://ajbarnett-story.blogspot.com/2008/04/conform-or-else.html
When sending your letter of enquiry, never include a file attachment unless you've been specifically invited to do so. You don't want to risk an anti-virus dumping your enquiry without seeing the light of day. That would be terrible!

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Monday, 19 May 2008

Writing Tips - Delete and feel better for it!

Tell Me a Story - writing tip

I was recently asked whether I spent more time on the start of the story, the middle or the end. I had to admit I really squirm over the start. The whole story has to be good of course or there will be nothing, but the start of your story has to be more than good, it has to be brilliant. It has to hook the reader.

The secret to a good start is to cut it out. Learn how and why on my Redgage article

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Thursday, 15 May 2008

Writing Tips - Unsticking Your Story

Time and again the same question seems to crop up on forums. A writer has come up against a wall and wants to know how to get moving again. My answer is always the same - most problems with writing boil down to planning.
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Story Brief - Balance, Proportion And Plot
20 Ways To Write A Story Better

Tuesday, 13 May 2008

The Plot Thickens

Tell Me a Story - writing tip

I'm on various forums, and people keep asking me the same old questions. For some reason there seems to be a problem with PLOT and what it should contain to be successful. I thought it might clarify a few points if wrote a short article about it on RedGage.

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Story Brief - Balance, Proportion And Plot
20 Ways To Write A Story Better

Friday, 9 May 2008

Credibility in characters

Tell Me a Story - writing tips

I hate it when I read a story and someone in it suddenly does something out of character. I feel like screaming! I've just thrown a book to one side - and no, I'm not naming names, I don't want a lawsuit thrown at me, but you know the sort of thing I'm on about.

Characters should be real.

We've all seen it at sometime. Honestly, I wonder how some writers get away with it. For God's sake characters are supposed to be REAL aren't they? If a character is quiet and shy, they're not likely to to go out of their way to find a career as a television presenter, are they! They wouldn't do it in real life, so why in a story.

Shit, I should know! I'm quiet (well mostly), I'm certainly shy, in fact I did a radio chat show a while ago .... and I was petrified. I HATE being the centre of attention, so why put fictional characters in stupid positions? IT DOESN'T WORK!

Character's aims and reactions MUST be consistent within the framework of the storyline. Don't make them do false things just to make a cheap line seem better. Readers might just start reaching for another book....

Make your characters real, guys. Make them credible! Keep the reader turning those pages.

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PAST SINS - Contemporary Romance
SHORT MOMENTS - Christian Value Stories without sermonizing

Monday, 5 May 2008

The Misconception of Conflict

Tell Me a Story - writing tips.

I'm sometimes asked for my views on conflict in a novel. I don't suppose there are hard and fast rules, but some jump to mind, which new writers ignore at their peril.

Certainly, misconception as a foundation for conflict is a no-go-area. I seriously doubt if any intelligent reader would tolerate an artificial state such as misconception. Readers simply question why the protagonists don’t enquire and resolve the problem immediately.

I've listed a few ideas. I'll never claim the list to be definitive, just a guideline that can be expanded but never disregarded.

Conflict generally falls into one of three categories. Man against man; man against nature/inanimate things; or man against himself. Of these, man against himself, has perhaps generated some of the most powerful emotions found in books.
  1. Characters should always be in a circumstance from which there is no apparent escape. If there's a way out, there is no conflict.
  2. The conflict must be plausible. Whatever the reason, the conflict must seem rational within the framework of the story.
  3. The intensity of the conflict(s) must vary throughout the story.
  4. Individuals should never go over the top for the sake of contradiction or effect. The conflict must justify the response.
  5. Only one conflict should be allowed to run through the entire book. Minor conflicts should interweave but for only relatively short periods.
  6. No chapter should be without conflict but it should vary in intensity, rising and falling throughout the book.
  7. The novel should start with the main problem, continue with obstacles of varying influence, then draw to a close with the resolution of the main problem.
  8. You must resolve the conflict you started with.
  9. You must leave no loose ends. All questions must be answered.
If anyone has anything to add, I'd love to hear from you.
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Romantic Suspense

Thursday, 1 May 2008

Interview with author, Russell Ash

Tell Me a Story - interview

Russell Ash has been writing books forever.
I imagine most of us have read, or at least consulted some of his work at some time. Russell puts most writers to shame with the sheer volume and quality of words. For him, it isn't just words though, his books consume hours of research. I caught up with Russell a couple of days ago, and somehow he managed to fit in a few extra words for me.

See the full interview at The Author, Russell Ash

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Tuesday, 29 April 2008

Writing Tips - Submission Guidelines

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First impressions are the ones that count, isn't that what everyone says. The way an editor perceives a piece of work could decide its future forever. Don't let your be rejected because it doesn't look right.

How to format a book - Mother knows best

You know what they say, mother knows best, and my mother used to say ‘first impressions count’. It was instilled into me as a youngster - wash your face, wear a good outfit - how inhibiting life was. How I loathed obeying the rules. It was for a reason though. Mum knew just how much those first impressions meant. 

Cruel but true.
It’s just as true when you need to format a book. The way an editor first perceives a book decides its prospects with that publishing house forever – it might sound severe, but I’m afraid it’s true. I know Mum would have understood.

Publishing houses might vary slightly in the way they want an author to format a manuscript but there are certain standards that seem to go clean across the board.


What new writers need to get to grips with are the basics, the conventions that apply to every genre. The submission guidelines might be adjusted here and there depending on the publisher, but they won't change enough to make a significant difference.

You have to understand that publishers and agents aren't just looking for a sizzling new author with a different voice; they want to know the author is professional. The way you present your manuscript tells them everything they want to know.
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Make or break
A quick glance at your book will make or break it. Editors in publishing houses are innundated with manuscripts, and they are only human - little things can sway them. Wouldn't it be terrible if it was tossed to one side without being read, simply because it didn't pass an editor's eye-test or it fluffed on the submission guidelines.Your precious plot down the drain because of silly stuff.

Put yourself in their position, you have pile of manuscripts to examine, some of which are scruffy, some presented in a pristine manner. You have limited time. Which are you going to look at first and which are you going to ignore?

Whether you format a romantic suspense or fantasy – you must give it your best shot. A few simple submission guidelines can at least give your work a fighting chance. Ignore them at your peril. 

How to format a book – Submission guidelines
  1. Use clean, WHITE, A4, 80gm paper when you format a book. If there are thumbprints, print another.
  2. Make sure your printer gives good quality type - give it new toner or ink.
  3. Print on ONE side of the page only
  4. FONT - use 12pt Times New Roman.
  5. Leave good margins all round, at least 1" - 1.5"
  6. Indent all paragraphs EXCEPT the first of each chapter
  7. Use DOUBLE line space (some publishes allow 1.5 space, but if you're not sure use double)
  8. ONLY use left justification
  9. Avoid widow and orphans
  10. On the first page, present all the details an editor needs - In the middle of the page about one-third down, the TITLE, below that your REAL NAME, below that your PEN-NAME, Below that the WORDCOUNT, give a few spaces then put your ADDRESS and TELEPHONE number and E-MAIL
  11. When you format a book, every page must have a strap - a shortened book name in the header, a couple of words should suffice.
  12. Every page must have a page number in the footer. It must be continuous, it must NOT start fresh with each chapter
  13. When you format a book, start each chapter of  with a NEW page, and type the chapter heading in capital letters
  14. DO NOT fasten the pages together, DO NOT pin them, DO NOT punch holes in them. DO NOT tie your manuscript with fancy bows and ribbons. If you must, place a large elastic band around, nothing else.
  15. When submitting your manuscript make the covering letter BRIEF and to the point, and don't talk about your kids or last holiday.
  16. Enclose a BRIEF synopsis - aim for less than one page, certainly no more than two - less is more!
  17. Do NOT underline any words.
  18. Use a SINGLE space between sentences.
  19. Don't forget to SPELLCHECK your work before submitting.
  20. If your manuscript is non fiction and you're including photos or artwork, protect them with cardboard.
I don't know about you, but I hate it when I finally seal the jiffy bag on my precious story. It's a final committment, a statement. There's no turning back after that. It's all in the hands of some faceless editor. How can I persuade them to even LOOK at my book. 

Linton Robinson, freelance writer says, "I'd like to point out a few things like, Americans don't have A4 paper, also, as many publishers actually specify Courier as Times New Roman.  It's always a good idea to check with the people you're submitting to."
- Thank you for that, Linton.

The sweet scent of success

When you know how to format a book correctly, at least it won't be thrown out for lack of first impression.

One thing I've done in the past and will continue to do, I put a light spray of quality perfume on the inside of the jiffy bag and let it dry. At least when opened, MY work has a pleasant fragrance, which might just invoke a subconscious impression .... fingers crossed.... .


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Sunday, 27 April 2008

In the Theme of Things

Tell Me a Story - writing tip

How do you set out your store for writing?

I've seen dozens of questions along this line posed in on-line chat systems such as Yahoo's 'Answers'. Loads of new writers have strange notions that authors sit a desk, rattle a few keys and out pops a story.... But what about theme....

To see the full account please go to the post at Redgage

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Saturday, 26 April 2008

Thursday, 24 April 2008

Writing Tips - A Time and a Place for Writing

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So you want to write but you don't have enough time. Rubbish! You're telling lies.

If you think you have no time, you're indulging in self-deception. Don't claim your job or your family or anything else, takes up so much of your time that you can't write.

If there was an emergency, you'd find time wouldn't you? Treat this as your own little emergency. Learn to prioritise! Okay, so you really do need to see to your family, I admit it. But there are other things that might be seen as important, that really aren't. You are important! What you want out of life is just as important as what your partner wants. We all have priorities, don't let someone else's priorities take a higher rank than your own. Explain that it really is not selfish to want a little time to yourself.

  • Get up early, understand your lifestyle and adjust it to suit - and write.
  • Don't watch TV, write.
  • Make the kids tidy their own beds and put their own things away, write.

It's surprising how you can cut corners and still make ends meet.
  • Don't idle your time away. Don't sit with a magazine with your coffee break. If you have spare time, sit with a pad and pen instead, and make notes.
  • Get into the habit of writing where ever you are (I've even made notes on the loo).
  • Get a digital audio recorder, keep it on you at all times - record those ideas as they bubble up.

Get your priorities right for heaven's sake! Get writing!

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Writing Tips - So, You Have Writer's Block?

Tell Me a Story - advice

Most of us have been there, done that, got the 'T' shirt. It may not be much comfort at the moment, but you're not alone in your suffering. Once you have a little experience you'll perhaps develop ways of dealing with it, some people maybe better than others, but most writers have to learn how to cope.

Read this article - Overcoming writer's block

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